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1/31/2010 c12 4HeirxxOfxxMerlin
This one revealed alot of info

now im curious as to who her dad is

hm...

cant wait for the next chapter =]
1/31/2010 c12 XRarityofTearsX
I bet Reina's predecessor was Aqua!
1/31/2010 c12 4Yuuko Aosagibi
O.O Wow, i'm impressed! I really like the ending! Update soon!
1/22/2010 c11 Yuuko Aosagibi
Aw! the ending was sweet, and I like how Demyx messed up. Update soon!
1/22/2010 c11 16Akizakura202
"The devil is in the details." You're right, the fight scenes were very brief XD It's almost like they shouldn't've been included at all, truthfully; much of the chapter seemed rushed because you were trying to cram so much in there. I'm assuming you wanted to keep the part about Reina's being tested of her loyalty and Sora's jealousy in the same chapter, and that's why it's all scrunched up into one, but you can twist the original storyline to your advantage a bit (I'm not saying don't do the world's events altogether, but you could've deleted, say, the second Pete part or something, y'know?)

I liked the part with Demyx, and I liked the drama (needs more XD!)

And I, as of like chapters ago, support SoraXReina! :D
1/21/2010 c11 4HeirxxOfxxMerlin
i loved it!

especially when Demyx almost let out the he knew Roxas ^.-

Read number 3 haha

keep it up XD
1/21/2010 c11 24SpringBorn
I didn't find anything wrong with it. I liked the chapter pretty well. I can't wait for the next one. Please update soon.
1/14/2010 c10 4HeirxxOfxxMerlin
i really enjoyed this story

please update soon!
1/6/2010 c10 4Yuuko Aosagibi
Oh my, that is just surprising at the end! ;o
1/6/2010 c10 16Akizakura202
Not one of your best, but still pretty good, I agree XD Damn cliffhangers! They're worse than teasers DX I implore you, get the next one out soon-I can't wait for the drama! XD

Oh-you didn't nickname Axel "Rapunzel," did you XD? Flamesilocks-though that is 358/2 Days-just fits better.

-Aki!
1/6/2010 c10 24SpringBorn
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

What's Roxas up to?

Is Reina falling for Sora? Just curious. Please update soon.
12/24/2009 c9 11justpink
This chapter was so GOOD! I especially love the ending! Really effective, but when does Roxas appear? Well, anyways update soon! Can't wait for more! And thanks for mentioning me!
12/23/2009 c9 24SpringBorn
I thought the chapter was good, real good. I'm no disapointed at all! I can't wait for the next chapter!
12/23/2009 c9 3XRarityoftearsX
That's too awesome it was so cute x3 Loved the SoraXReina stuff. Reina should exist in the KH world =/
12/23/2009 c9 16Akizakura202
XD Okey, I think this is my favorite chapter thus far. The part with the masks made me laugh a little and overall, SoraXReina tends to make me smile-they're very cute and I fully support them as a couple. Can't wait for any drama to ensue when/if Roxas is added into the mix more . . . concretely (I think that's the word I'm looking for, at least.) Love it!

Still interested in the Nobodies' plan, wondering what's going on there . . . the way you have Namine scheming it's almost like she's going to be the villain that will steal Reina's heart! (I am pretty sure I'm wrong on this, but I'm giving it a go anyway XD!)

Not too shabby a job on the battle scenes, young squire. Very brief, but then it's not like Shiro Amano did differently in the Kingdom Hearts manga, ne? (Get used to Naruto battles, and ya forget XD) There were a few spelling and grammar errors here or there-place like where you probably hit the period by accident instead of the comma and it just automatically capitalized the next word (makes it so hard to catch -_-) and then for some reson I think Mrs. Potts' name keeps getting delted or doesn't wanna show up for some reason . . . strange.

Any-who, keep up the good work, totally looking forward to more~! :) This story has now made it onto my favorites.
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