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12/23/2009 c9 4Yuuko Aosagibi
Aw, I think the ending was really sweet. I'm not sure what the nobodies' plan is really, so I can't give much opinion, though it sounds complicated. Update soon!
12/8/2009 c2 4Battle-Royalist
Cool fic
12/7/2009 c8 4Yuuko Aosagibi
I really liked the ending~ Reina is righ though; Sora's cooking is something everyone has to fear! XD Update soon!
12/7/2009 c8 11justpink
I love it! Especially that little Sora and Reina moment, but I still prefer Roxas :D, Yay! Update Soon!
12/7/2009 c8 16Akizakura202
Bonjour, mon anime~! Comment vas-tu? (XD J'ai une classe de francais, aussi! . . . Though I think I just said that sentence incorrectly XD)

I actually ended up reading this chapter twice, just so I could leave an actual review! :D It was pretty good, though I think it would've been even better if the fight scenes were in more detail. It seems like you were trying to cram a whole bunch of events into one chapter when there's no need to-personally, I am a fan of long chapters, though mine tend to stay around or just under five thousand words whereas yours seems to've gone over six thousand XD If you were afraid of making it too long, you could've just as easily separated it into more parts.

Still have that problem with the dialogue where you're doing the wrong punctuation (period instead of comma as needed) but it was a smidgen less manifest. I noticed a spelling errors that I've also been having problems with lately XD Putting "out" instead of "our." May wish to nip that one in the bud-if you start getting used to making that mistake, it will appear much more often XP

I like the SoraXReina moment at the end very much, it was rather sweet *^^* Hopin' for more, soon.

Au revoir pour maintenant!
12/7/2009 c8 3XRarityoftearsX
Thankies ^W^ So awesome =3
12/7/2009 c8 24SpringBorn
I liked the chapter alot and didn't think it was boring at all. Keep up the good work. I'm glad you finaly updated. I can't wait for the next one. I want to see what happens. *Smiles widely*
11/29/2009 c7 11justpink
Ohmygeeze! I just love how you wrote this chapter, I love the Roxas part!, Hm...I wonder what Roxas is going to do... XD

Overall, great job! Update Soon
11/27/2009 c7 4Yuuko Aosagibi
^^ Well, now I get the feeling that Roxas is going to do something stupid. Update soon!
11/27/2009 c7 24SpringBorn
Loved the chapter. It was very well writened. I can't wait for the next one.
11/26/2009 c7 3XRarityoftearsX
Very cool!
11/24/2009 c6 24SpringBorn
Loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one.

What does Rocas have up his sleeve?
11/15/2009 c6 4Yuuko Aosagibi
Ah, It was pretty good! It's the first time I've read about an OC thatdidn't stick with Sora. Update soon!
11/15/2009 c6 xxBelovedXX
e it's really good ^^

can't wait for the next chapter
11/13/2009 c6 3XRarityoftearsX
I love this chapter! Make sure to have the next one sent to me soon! Or i'll hunt you down and kill you in your sleep! ...I'm kidding! ...Or AM I?
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