for 151 Caroline Street9/12/2009 c1 
1Sweet Candy 7PL
Your back! Can i just say this is AMAZING! boy oh boy it made my day.You must go on and on I can't wait to see what you do with this like thier living together? how when why? but other then that i hope you're doing better/getting better.
1Sweet Candy 7PLYour back! Can i just say this is AMAZING! boy oh boy it made my day.You must go on and on I can't wait to see what you do with this like thier living together? how when why? but other then that i hope you're doing better/getting better.
9/12/2009 c1 11Midnightflavoblaze
Interesting and very image-heavy story. Do you know french? There were some mistakes in your translations. The main one was that you used 'vous' instead of 'tu/toi.' The 'tu' form is the informal version of 'you' and since they are lovers it would need to be used.
Other than that and a few general spelling errors (which you sould carefully reread your work to find), your work shows promise.
11MidnightflavoblazeInteresting and very image-heavy story. Do you know french? There were some mistakes in your translations. The main one was that you used 'vous' instead of 'tu/toi.' The 'tu' form is the informal version of 'you' and since they are lovers it would need to be used.
Other than that and a few general spelling errors (which you sould carefully reread your work to find), your work shows promise.
9/11/2009 c1 2Anna Marcia Gregorio
woah.
that was... intense.
man, is it hot over here or what? haha.
Great begining chapter.
i look forward to reading more.
adios!
2Anna Marcia Gregoriowoah.
that was... intense.
man, is it hot over here or what? haha.
Great begining chapter.
i look forward to reading more.
adios!
9/11/2009 c1 10pennylane87
Oh my good Lord! this was terrific, ain't Rogue a lucky gal... thanks for a great friday reading I loved it. I don't know if this was a one-shot or you're thinking to write more. The title was so very cool, I guess is their home address right? which is great kind of gives the idea of both of them settling down :D
10pennylane87Oh my good Lord! this was terrific, ain't Rogue a lucky gal... thanks for a great friday reading I loved it. I don't know if this was a one-shot or you're thinking to write more. The title was so very cool, I guess is their home address right? which is great kind of gives the idea of both of them settling down :D
9/11/2009 c1 Clear Blue
Holy Crap! Whoa- nice work! This is one of my favs from you :D Nothing like some good Romy love...I wonder how they got there i wonder where they will go and i don't mean the washroom but that would be good too ;-) HAHAHAHA!
Holy Crap! Whoa- nice work! This is one of my favs from you :D Nothing like some good Romy love...I wonder how they got there i wonder where they will go and i don't mean the washroom but that would be good too ;-) HAHAHAHA!
9/11/2009 c1 whenthesnowmelts
I love rogue, she's one of my favorites. lol. keep going, what happens next in this relationship? You should bring out wolverine! lol.
I love rogue, she's one of my favorites. lol. keep going, what happens next in this relationship? You should bring out wolverine! lol.