for What if?12/28/2016 c1 Donni
This was really neat! I liked Orihime's inner world and how you described Harry. It was really cool!
This was really neat! I liked Orihime's inner world and how you described Harry. It was really cool!
8/25/2016 c1 
1LoneWolfAndCub
instead of Orihime with Harry. Karin with Itachi. Her Zanpakuto resembles Sasuke's Katana from the Boruto Movie. Shikai is Sasuke's Chokoto and grants Sharingan and Bankai grants Mangekyou with Amateratsu, TsukiyomiSusano'o. The downside is that to use her bankai. She needs to see some one close to her die to unlock it and it drains Reiatsu like Naruto on a Ramen Bender.
1LoneWolfAndCubinstead of Orihime with Harry. Karin with Itachi. Her Zanpakuto resembles Sasuke's Katana from the Boruto Movie. Shikai is Sasuke's Chokoto and grants Sharingan and Bankai grants Mangekyou with Amateratsu, TsukiyomiSusano'o. The downside is that to use her bankai. She needs to see some one close to her die to unlock it and it drains Reiatsu like Naruto on a Ramen Bender.
4/5/2016 c1 1310
That was... AWESOME! Too bad you didn't make a battle scene though... Wanted to know how Orihime will fight but.. Oh well!
That was... AWESOME! Too bad you didn't make a battle scene though... Wanted to know how Orihime will fight but.. Oh well!
7/21/2015 c1 1Astraea J. Rahagi
why is it only oneshot? whereas the idea of the story is very good, writing is also okay ... *sigh* really unfortunate. but, thanks for sharing.
1Astraea J. Rahagiwhy is it only oneshot? whereas the idea of the story is very good, writing is also okay ... *sigh* really unfortunate. but, thanks for sharing.
4/14/2015 c1 7rmiser1994
interesting twist! it sounded the fight scene was going to be epic! too bad one-shot ... feeling up to another chapter? only if you want to of course.
7rmiser1994interesting twist! it sounded the fight scene was going to be epic! too bad one-shot ... feeling up to another chapter? only if you want to of course.
6/25/2014 c1 Winter's Folly
I am going to assume your challenging us to give you challenging Zanpaktou's. What about Saber(King Arturia) from fate/stay night as an alternative Zanpaktou for Ichigo? I actually think that can be worked.
I am going to assume your challenging us to give you challenging Zanpaktou's. What about Saber(King Arturia) from fate/stay night as an alternative Zanpaktou for Ichigo? I actually think that can be worked.
5/11/2014 c1 SakiXX1
This short story is interesting and cool in how Harry is a zanpakutou. I wonder how Bleach would be like if Orihime was a shingami and with Harry's presence in it.
This short story is interesting and cool in how Harry is a zanpakutou. I wonder how Bleach would be like if Orihime was a shingami and with Harry's presence in it.
11/3/2013 c1 alexanderjohn.golveo
I Read just the and I can tell this story has potential,reading the story itself ? Major boost in my belief that this story has HUGE potential! And I. Was wondering if this story will have a sequel or someone will adopt it from you?
And seeing as harry is from the west and not the East shount his shikai and bankai be scythes like a stereotype grim reaper? Seeing as he is british AND Master Of Death?
I Read just the and I can tell this story has potential,reading the story itself ? Major boost in my belief that this story has HUGE potential! And I. Was wondering if this story will have a sequel or someone will adopt it from you?
And seeing as harry is from the west and not the East shount his shikai and bankai be scythes like a stereotype grim reaper? Seeing as he is british AND Master Of Death?