for Mercy4/10/2012 c1 
7Aria-Eclipse
hahahahahahahaahahahaahahaaaa! I can't believe that oh that is rich i can't believe he just did that to her! But. . . . I'm still digested because the took her virginity and treated her like dirt i mean what the hellos his problem!
7Aria-Eclipsehahahahahahahaahahahaahahaaaa! I can't believe that oh that is rich i can't believe he just did that to her! But. . . . I'm still digested because the took her virginity and treated her like dirt i mean what the hellos his problem!
8/8/2011 c1 hii
so ummmmmmm fuck you for ending there it had the potensiat of a great story and now its just shit in my books
so ummmmmmm fuck you for ending there it had the potensiat of a great story and now its just shit in my books
2/9/2011 c1 6Sinful-Valentine
lol this story made me happy.i couldnt help the chulkes and giggles that came out.but the inu-tatichis treatment was a little harsh,but all in all i like the story
6Sinful-Valentinelol this story made me happy.i couldnt help the chulkes and giggles that came out.but the inu-tatichis treatment was a little harsh,but all in all i like the story
3/25/2010 c1 5x-bankotsu-luver-x
omg! i jut read a story by WhiteStars with all three of you guys in it! it was hilarious! XD
5x-bankotsu-luver-xomg! i jut read a story by WhiteStars with all three of you guys in it! it was hilarious! XD
12/30/2009 c1 Red Pineapples
i love whitestars and your work. together its an awesome oneshot. love it.
i love whitestars and your work. together its an awesome oneshot. love it.
9/27/2009 c1 Banny'slittlebunny
aw -WhiteStars- i love her fics. i'm adding this to my faves for sure. good job both of you.
aw -WhiteStars- i love her fics. i'm adding this to my faves for sure. good job both of you.
9/18/2009 c1 forever
loved it
loved it
9/15/2009 c1 12WhiteStars
Haha I loved how you added more detail into my parts, and I LOVED the ending. It was just so...original. He asked her to pour him some sake lol like that. Lol I wonder if she really did.
That was kind of a lemon. Did you try to write it on purpose? I can't believe Kagome's friends just left her like that. I thought Shippo would at least stay by her side. Roflmao he wasn't in the story.
So Jakotsu and Bankotsu were talking about Kagome, and they were both being cruel. Okay lol when Kagome just came out of the bushes it made me laugh so hard LOL I still can't stop laughing.
Thanks for saying I'm hilarious. You are too. I'm adding this on my favorite stories list. This is the best one-shot ever. Oh and its not just because I wrote half. Kitty likes it! I saw her review.
12WhiteStarsHaha I loved how you added more detail into my parts, and I LOVED the ending. It was just so...original. He asked her to pour him some sake lol like that. Lol I wonder if she really did.
That was kind of a lemon. Did you try to write it on purpose? I can't believe Kagome's friends just left her like that. I thought Shippo would at least stay by her side. Roflmao he wasn't in the story.
So Jakotsu and Bankotsu were talking about Kagome, and they were both being cruel. Okay lol when Kagome just came out of the bushes it made me laugh so hard LOL I still can't stop laughing.
Thanks for saying I'm hilarious. You are too. I'm adding this on my favorite stories list. This is the best one-shot ever. Oh and its not just because I wrote half. Kitty likes it! I saw her review.