for Когда я говорю подпрыгни, выспрашиваете как высоко2/21/2011 c1 
5Rose-Phoenix0
HAHA! This one was soo funny! I like your humor. I hope you update soon.
I also wouldn't mind more Rose/Dimitri 'private' moments
5Rose-Phoenix0HAHA! This one was soo funny! I like your humor. I hope you update soon.
I also wouldn't mind more Rose/Dimitri 'private' moments
1/29/2011 c2 1Lara172008
So... did anyone adopt this story? :)
Good luck in the army (I'm Australian)... I think its really honourable that you're fighting for our country. Stay safe, and thank you... I assure you if you do join the army (or if you already have) so many people are grateful for what you're doing for our country
xx
1Lara172008So... did anyone adopt this story? :)
Good luck in the army (I'm Australian)... I think its really honourable that you're fighting for our country. Stay safe, and thank you... I assure you if you do join the army (or if you already have) so many people are grateful for what you're doing for our country
xx
10/8/2010 c1 29Nicia
hehe lol that last bit made me giggle. I like the flirty Dimitri, but you need to make it only 19 left to go or I'll make you do 60 Rose. She'd done 31, and you wrote that she needed to do 29 more which makes 60. Sorry if I'm bein picky, but I've read other stories where people make similar mistakes and their readers report them for it. You're a brill writer so I wanted to warn ya xx
29Niciahehe lol that last bit made me giggle. I like the flirty Dimitri, but you need to make it only 19 left to go or I'll make you do 60 Rose. She'd done 31, and you wrote that she needed to do 29 more which makes 60. Sorry if I'm bein picky, but I've read other stories where people make similar mistakes and their readers report them for it. You're a brill writer so I wanted to warn ya xx
9/20/2010 c1 7alicecullenlvr
Hmmmm...it was good, better than most I see on here, but it seemed incomplete. Whether it'd be better as a one-shot or as one of those that's just meant to be a multichaptered story, I'm not sure. Maybe it's just me.
7alicecullenlvrHmmmm...it was good, better than most I see on here, but it seemed incomplete. Whether it'd be better as a one-shot or as one of those that's just meant to be a multichaptered story, I'm not sure. Maybe it's just me.
7/29/2010 c1 jaida
Hoorah i loved it.
Hoorah i loved it.
6/24/2010 c1 7vamplee94
Haha! So good! I loved it! It was cute, and they really seemed like THEM. i don't know if that makes sense to you, but yeah.
My favorite part was the very last line. "Dimitri Belikov just winked."
I must tell you, I giggled like a school girl, just picturing it.
Good job.
Sam.
7vamplee94Haha! So good! I loved it! It was cute, and they really seemed like THEM. i don't know if that makes sense to you, but yeah.
My favorite part was the very last line. "Dimitri Belikov just winked."
I must tell you, I giggled like a school girl, just picturing it.
Good job.
Sam.
5/31/2010 c1 Jeo
Hot! I want to know what happens tomorrow!
Hot! I want to know what happens tomorrow!
3/27/2010 c1 russianfan
Excuse me but you have some little mistakes in the title.
I just want to correct you.
you should write: "Когда я говорю подпрыгни, вы спрашиваете как высоко"
Excuse me but you have some little mistakes in the title.
I just want to correct you.
you should write: "Когда я говорю подпрыгни, вы спрашиваете как высоко"
3/5/2010 c1 SharpMaz
I know thats just a one shot but thats a really good beginning to a story. I say give it a go if you want, I would deffinetly read it. :)
I know thats just a one shot but thats a really good beginning to a story. I say give it a go if you want, I would deffinetly read it. :)
1/25/2010 c1 ain020596
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!