for Illicit Luurve2/2/2010 c1 
1floatcoral
Hehe.. I forgot to leave a review, didn't I? I apologize.
Sure, I'll help just send me a message on my account. I'm also writing one, it's with Sasuke. My Oc. I'll help.
1floatcoralHehe.. I forgot to leave a review, didn't I? I apologize.
Sure, I'll help just send me a message on my account. I'm also writing one, it's with Sasuke. My Oc. I'll help.
9/18/2009 c1 2Pillars of Creation
Livvy, my darling, thank you sososososososo much for that! :) I absolutely loved it to bits and would love it even more if you continued it, maybe (like in Dorian Gray) if it's like when the book starts from the MIDDLE of the story, and this could be like the prologue, and the next chapter could be the beginning of 'how it all started'...? That would be a humungous, 5 litre bottle of awesome sauce!
Once more, thank you, I loved it and it was the awesomest birthday present you could ever give me! :)
x
Lots of hugs and kisses,
Your big sister/editor,
Alex
2Pillars of CreationLivvy, my darling, thank you sososososososo much for that! :) I absolutely loved it to bits and would love it even more if you continued it, maybe (like in Dorian Gray) if it's like when the book starts from the MIDDLE of the story, and this could be like the prologue, and the next chapter could be the beginning of 'how it all started'...? That would be a humungous, 5 litre bottle of awesome sauce!
Once more, thank you, I loved it and it was the awesomest birthday present you could ever give me! :)
x
Lots of hugs and kisses,
Your big sister/editor,
Alex
9/17/2009 c1 17N-AngelFire
wow. SOMEBODY has a dirty mind. lolz. anywayzers i thought it was interesting, although i don't get much from the chick. i have no idea what she looks like.
your writing style is very descriptive which is good, tres good. congratulations on a most fascinating oneshot.
The one and only
P.S. somewhere near the beginning you wrote that Kabuto 'Savaged' her mouth. i think you meant 'Ravaged'... just a suggestion dear.
17N-AngelFirewow. SOMEBODY has a dirty mind. lolz. anywayzers i thought it was interesting, although i don't get much from the chick. i have no idea what she looks like.
your writing style is very descriptive which is good, tres good. congratulations on a most fascinating oneshot.
The one and only
P.S. somewhere near the beginning you wrote that Kabuto 'Savaged' her mouth. i think you meant 'Ravaged'... just a suggestion dear.