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12/14/2015 c1 kazutoxx123
Please make more chapters.
10/29/2015 c2 1Ceilo415
4/7/2013 c2 mohahassan3
fuck it just got good
7/18/2012 c2 Ookami namikaze
When the next one
8/12/2011 c2 Vail Ryuketsu
please make the rewrite or a update soon. And for the girls I say Lal Mirch, and Chrome
8/2/2011 c1 1MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs
...a thousand handseals? Do you know how long that would take? He'd have died horribly before he could have completed it.

I also don't get the point of covering them in elemental chakra (which they likely have never used the majority of) when they only use FIRE FIRE AND MORE FIRE.

Was there even a point to it? With nine-tails sage mode, Naruto likely could have destroyed most of an army on his own. The cloak would protect him whenever he needed to pause to gather Natural Energy for his Sage Mode, and the cloak likely would have protected him from elemental and sonic attacks.

And he would have beaten them all down if he knew the Hiraishin.

Really, the only thing he needed to do was summon either Hashirama, Tobirama, or Minato. Hashirama could have summoned a giant forest that crushed them, Tobirama could have summoned a giant wave and used a lightning technique on them, and Minato could have used Hiraishin.

Well, either way, lots of the beginning seemed pretty pointless.

Y'know, the whole "meets shinigami and kami" thing annoys me quite often. Isn't there another term or four for "benevolent goddess" somewhere in a random mythology that you could use instead of another language's term for "spirit" or "God" that would be more appropriate?
12/22/2010 c1 Teres22
N.i.c.e lol cant wait for the next chapters its a good Crossover even if there lil things that bug but arent importent :DD
11/11/2010 c2 I'MNOTCRAZY1
Yeah. I was going to comment about a bunch of stuff I found were out of place. First off, having to marry at least two women? I guess it would be ok later if Reborn were to say that having more than one woman would be ok for a mafia boss, if Naruto has a dilemma about more than one girl, but having to marry more than one? That can't be right.

Personally, I like both Kyoko and Haru, and probably Chrome as a third for pairings. I've always been all 'lolwut?' at how well Kyoko and Haru get along, since they're love-rivals, but who knows what Amano-sensei is thinking. I do, however have a feeling that there's going to be a Sea set of rings.
11/11/2010 c2 Shawn-san
i think i got some idea for ya...

like some ppl said for tsuna got split personallity, how bout making naruto as some one inside tsuna mind like kyubi...

he doesnt actually need to change his appearence or so until he go hyper mode or using the vongola gear or something.Since juz change changing the look will prety much freak everybody out so when he is hit with a dying will bullet he go naruto mode something like yugi in yugioh...
10/11/2010 c1 Ultimate-Zelda-fan
I'm surprised you didn't have everyone, INCLUDING Reborn, facefault at Nana's comment about getting more grandchildren! LOL

Oh and I vote for Kyoko, Haru, and Chrome for Naruto's girls.
9/10/2010 c1 Spidey-JE
I'm sad you didn't update this story, but I understand when authors lose interest. I put up a story with a similar idea and was wondering if I could get your opinion on it.
8/3/2010 c1 AnimeAddict4Life
loving this shit update soon
7/30/2010 c1 1Jarjaxle
Great Story so far. Plz Release next Chapter as soon as you can.

Poll 1: Lal Mirch, Kyoko and Haru ( Haru Because Naruto Is TSUNA, so she also)

Poll 2; SKY of course.

Poll 3; Somekind Special Kunai, Shuriken or some other ninja tool,

or special sword. Or something that becomes a weapon, like special hiate. (that thing in ninjas forhead)
7/14/2010 c1 1cherrybloossoms
6/7/2010 c1 World62590
here is an idea for your stroy, it could actually make it better. have the main character have a split personality. Have it go back and fouth between to two, and slowly have the two merge, and have an who an I crisis.
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