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12/6/2009 c2 DanielaBlack67
I am n love with the story so far. I wish the chapters where longer though. Please, keep writing.
12/6/2009 c2 3Peace in love
Are you going to continue the story? I think it's absolutely lovely. =)
11/6/2009 c2 20James Birdsong
Cool. Sweet
9/21/2009 c2 9Lion.Lovin.Lamb
Beautiful!

I thoroughly enjoyed it.

I love Edwards part. I don't know why but from the first chapter I had the impression that Bella was Alice but of course...it makes way more sense for Alice to be Alice. Silly me...yet again.

Keep writing...I love it so far.

One thing...are you keeping the original names from twilight? Or from Alice In Wonderland?

Looking forward to reading chapter 3. =D X
9/18/2009 c1 Lion.Lovin.Lamb
Wow I adore you're first chapter. Its short, yet incredibly detailed and sweet. It is extremely well written as well, especially for a first fan fiction. I do love the originality of it all. I absolutely loved Alice and Wonderland when I was younger and I love you're take on it. Particularly as its a cross over with twilight. Also Your vocabulary is beautiful and no especially noticable grammar mistakes either. Very good job. Really I cant really say a bad word about it. All I suggest is maybe increasing the chapters a little more (maybe this is what you plan to do and this is only an insight I dont know), which normally keeps the readers more interested through out the fic. But hey this is your fic, you know whats what, so I cant interfere. Good luck with it. Cant wait to read your second chapter. Lots Of Love Jaz x

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