for naruto twilights rage2/28/2018 c4 Guest
Dear writer please make more chapters
Dear writer please make more chapters
8/21/2016 c2 John
Great chapter but Xion has black hair not navy blue but keep it up.
Great chapter but Xion has black hair not navy blue but keep it up.
8/19/2016 c1 John
Great first chapter but I find it unrealistic that Xemnas is Maduro's uncle and an Uzumaki he is not an Red head and it would be more likely if it was Axel as his cousin.
Great first chapter but I find it unrealistic that Xemnas is Maduro's uncle and an Uzumaki he is not an Red head and it would be more likely if it was Axel as his cousin.
6/9/2014 c4 Jacob
Hi can you make more chapters I've read all of them and love your stories please
Hi can you make more chapters I've read all of them and love your stories please
3/4/2014 c4 Guest
I cant wait but who else will be in narutos harem i know its xion and mei what about anko and lexaren
I cant wait but who else will be in narutos harem i know its xion and mei what about anko and lexaren
1/26/2014 c4 buttsplosion
you're an idiot for putting the same message on all four stories, when one could easily suffice to notify your fanbase
you're an idiot for putting the same message on all four stories, when one could easily suffice to notify your fanbase
1/26/2014 c4 
1CorvoKurze
It's good to see that you're back. I believe that your stories are amazing, all four of them.
1CorvoKurzeIt's good to see that you're back. I believe that your stories are amazing, all four of them.
1/26/2014 c4 Agato - The Hadou Inari
Well if you are then take my advice and get a Beta to help with your grammar and somewhat with your spelling.
Not in the ass way but to improve way.
Well if you are then take my advice and get a Beta to help with your grammar and somewhat with your spelling.
Not in the ass way but to improve way.
1/28/2013 c3 Agato - The Hadou Inari
Just try for more lengthy chapters and a Beta and you'll be good to go.
Just try for more lengthy chapters and a Beta and you'll be good to go.
7/7/2012 c3 Guest
when are you going to update these fics because i would like to read them more
when are you going to update these fics because i would like to read them more