9/6/2010 c1 8Talis Ruadair
Wow, one of the reviewers to this was very harsh. I think I'm going to see if that person has any stories and how wonderful his or hers are. I didn't think it was your best but I wouldn't call it lame. I would love to see more of it. Since you've been asking about rewriting some of your stories perhaps this is one you should consider. I still really cannot believe someone was that rude in a review! Sorry, I guess I believe in giving constructive criticism.

9/22/2009 c1 6ally leigh
Cute start to the story, I like a good Lash/Magenta story and this definitely seems promising. I can't wait to read more.