for The Dog In The Window5/2/2011 c8 Sarah
Its been a while sence I read this last (4+months) I want more! Please keep writing.
Its been a while sence I read this last (4+months) I want more! Please keep writing.
5/2/2010 c8 
1Casseia
I am loveing this story! Its cute its sweet its adorable! The consept is a little weard but not too out there (velvatean rabit) but I love it because its more than that.
My only critasisum is that you have every one speaking in the same paragraph. It is a little confusing to read because I can not always tell who is saying what. It is standard format to to start a new parograph each time the speaker changes.
overall I and Amber Hermione (ff writer too) love your story cant wait to read more
1CasseiaI am loveing this story! Its cute its sweet its adorable! The consept is a little weard but not too out there (velvatean rabit) but I love it because its more than that.
My only critasisum is that you have every one speaking in the same paragraph. It is a little confusing to read because I can not always tell who is saying what. It is standard format to to start a new parograph each time the speaker changes.
overall I and Amber Hermione (ff writer too) love your story cant wait to read more
4/10/2010 c8 8MiaRain
OMG! Yes, it was a bit confussing with the people talking. I got confused. And it could be detailed a little... But other than that, it was cute~ ^-^ I wonder if Idiana will catch Shu and Yuki... urm, well you knoe lol.
~Mia~*~cruz~
8MiaRainOMG! Yes, it was a bit confussing with the people talking. I got confused. And it could be detailed a little... But other than that, it was cute~ ^-^ I wonder if Idiana will catch Shu and Yuki... urm, well you knoe lol.
~Mia~*~cruz~
3/27/2010 c7 MiaRain
OMG! Yay~ Thank you for the chapter. Wow, this is stupid but it bothered me that the letters were, "OXOX" instead or, "XOXO" lol wierd aren't I?
~Mia~*~Cruz~
OMG! Yay~ Thank you for the chapter. Wow, this is stupid but it bothered me that the letters were, "OXOX" instead or, "XOXO" lol wierd aren't I?
~Mia~*~Cruz~
3/20/2010 c5 UWriteCrap
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You've posted TWO entries that aren't allowed here, both of them are author notes. For that, two abuse reports have been sent. Remove them before this archive bans you.
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1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc. 2. One or two liners. 3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story. 4. Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc. 5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc. 6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
11/24/2009 c4 MiaRain
OMG!... RAWR! Hahaha, I kept giggling like a little girl. *pouts* I thought Indiana would be, like... hm, I couldn't have expected her to be five or seven. *smacks head* I love Indiana already!
~Mia~*~Cruz~
OMG!... RAWR! Hahaha, I kept giggling like a little girl. *pouts* I thought Indiana would be, like... hm, I couldn't have expected her to be five or seven. *smacks head* I love Indiana already!
~Mia~*~Cruz~
11/4/2009 c3 8MiaRain
OMG!... GAH!XD XD XD Oh my! Yay, Yuichi's alive! Aww, can she be mistaken for Yuki's daughter? o_0 (Runs around my living room) Crepes sound GOD! ^-^ Your right, we can never be sure of their gender! Please, please continue! (I like the name Shuki~!)
~Mia~*~Cruz~
8MiaRainOMG!... GAH!XD XD XD Oh my! Yay, Yuichi's alive! Aww, can she be mistaken for Yuki's daughter? o_0 (Runs around my living room) Crepes sound GOD! ^-^ Your right, we can never be sure of their gender! Please, please continue! (I like the name Shuki~!)
~Mia~*~Cruz~
11/4/2009 c2 MiaRain
OMG! Aww, how cute~! Finally, a person who unleashes Shuichi's childish side! (bows down to you, then looks up with sparkling eyes) Hehe, I love your personality! How old are you? Are you a teen or a child at heart? o_0 Lol sorry, I'm being obnoxious! ^-^
OMG! Aww, how cute~! Finally, a person who unleashes Shuichi's childish side! (bows down to you, then looks up with sparkling eyes) Hehe, I love your personality! How old are you? Are you a teen or a child at heart? o_0 Lol sorry, I'm being obnoxious! ^-^
10/17/2009 c2 18The Crystal Pen
TEWG: *w* I LOVE THIS STORY. MY TEDI AND I LOVE IT.
801: I like this story. I also like Yuichi. xD Cracked me up.
TEWG & 801
18The Crystal PenTEWG: *w* I LOVE THIS STORY. MY TEDI AND I LOVE IT.
801: I like this story. I also like Yuichi. xD Cracked me up.
TEWG & 801