for A Trip Through Time1/2/2015 c5 Guest
Man, you sound like she's a weakling, which she is. And on end of the chapter she's going unconscious.
Man, you sound like she's a weakling, which she is. And on end of the chapter she's going unconscious.
1/2/2015 c3 Guest
Your always feeling unconscious. To be honest it's pissing me off
Your always feeling unconscious. To be honest it's pissing me off
2/22/2011 c1 The Detective S
Doesn't make sense so far, but I'm game. Spelling and grammar issues, but otherwise you're okay.
Doesn't make sense so far, but I'm game. Spelling and grammar issues, but otherwise you're okay.
12/31/2009 c5 
2sarcasticlover93
Great! Very entertaining...some spelling problems...but all is well! Update son!
2sarcasticlover93Great! Very entertaining...some spelling problems...but all is well! Update son!
11/13/2009 c1 Me
Great!
Great!
9/26/2009 c1 leopard high in the mountains
This looks good! Please update soon!
Just a tip, rist should be wrist, and honnors, should be honors.
Great overall!
This looks good! Please update soon!
Just a tip, rist should be wrist, and honnors, should be honors.
Great overall!