for The Untold Story of Warriors10/30/2009 c4 GinnyStar
She did what she had to do, and now is protecting her new leader and deputy and clan.
She did what she had to do, and now is protecting her new leader and deputy and clan.
10/16/2009 c3 
6Capitaine Jaf
This is really good! I hope we get to understand what happened to Heatherfoot and Lionpaw a bit more... One thing I noticed, you called Spottedfire Spottedleaf twice, so you might want to fix that. Can't wait to read more!
~Jaf
6Capitaine JafThis is really good! I hope we get to understand what happened to Heatherfoot and Lionpaw a bit more... One thing I noticed, you called Spottedfire Spottedleaf twice, so you might want to fix that. Can't wait to read more!
~Jaf
10/13/2009 c3 GinnyStar
Well written, no night fasting, or some special for the new one?
Good interaction, nice description of background of what going on.
Well written, no night fasting, or some special for the new one?
Good interaction, nice description of background of what going on.
9/25/2009 c2 GinnyStar
Good interaction, well written, and good background. A quesiton do new Warrior stand a night watch or something?
Good interaction, well written, and good background. A quesiton do new Warrior stand a night watch or something?
9/25/2009 c1 GinnyStar
“What? Cant a cat get some sleep around here?” You mean can't do you not. Good interaction, well written, and good discription of the background.
“What? Cant a cat get some sleep around here?” You mean can't do you not. Good interaction, well written, and good discription of the background.