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11/13/2010 c1 7maremarethebear
I know these are annoying but I'm trying to let everyone know that there's a new "Antigone" category under plays/musicals if you want to add your story to it.
10/9/2009 c1 12words behind my eyelids
The concept isn't bad, and thank you for the pronunciation notes. You spelled 'cousin' as 'cozen', 'awe' as 'aw', 'four' as 'fore' and 'very' as 'vary', though. Your spell-checking program didn't catch these errors because cozen, fore, aw, and vary are all words, but they have different meanings from the words you meant to use. You also switch back and forth between tenses. I really like this story, and would like to read more. Please proof-read more carefully or invest in a good beta-reader. Thank you for posting! I really love your characters.

xoxo WBME

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