for Parts of me Dying2/11/2011 c1 Kermitty
That was amazing. There aren't enough stories about Bill in his younger years around. This one is really good!
Love,
Kermitty
That was amazing. There aren't enough stories about Bill in his younger years around. This one is really good!
Love,
Kermitty
11/12/2010 c1 Rennde
AHHHH, you're an amazing writer! This is really good... and so sad... and yet so good! I love the way you explore Ginny and Bill's relationship... J.K. Rowling doesn't mention it much in the books, but it totally makes sense this way. I really loved the part about how even when you realize that your parents are infallible, your older brother still seems perfect. And Bill is totally the type of person who would keep up that facade for the sake of his family. In short (haha, I'm so long-winded), amazing work!
AHHHH, you're an amazing writer! This is really good... and so sad... and yet so good! I love the way you explore Ginny and Bill's relationship... J.K. Rowling doesn't mention it much in the books, but it totally makes sense this way. I really loved the part about how even when you realize that your parents are infallible, your older brother still seems perfect. And Bill is totally the type of person who would keep up that facade for the sake of his family. In short (haha, I'm so long-winded), amazing work!
3/28/2010 c1 
14laneykin
I loved it!
Very sweet :)
And an insight into how my eldest sister probably feels
14laneykinI loved it!
Very sweet :)
And an insight into how my eldest sister probably feels
11/12/2009 c1 1Glasslocketz
I really like it, it is very moving, tho not enough to make me cry. =]
I'm an only child, so I don't really understand the relationship between siblings, but I really wanted an older brother. Now I think about it, maybe I want a younger one, so I could be the oldest. =]
Good job.
1GlasslocketzI really like it, it is very moving, tho not enough to make me cry. =]
I'm an only child, so I don't really understand the relationship between siblings, but I really wanted an older brother. Now I think about it, maybe I want a younger one, so I could be the oldest. =]
Good job.
10/2/2009 c1 8merlinhelz
It is rare to read a story about the dynamic between Ginny and Bill. Ginny is always portrayed in relation to her life at Hogwarts, particularly in relation to the trio. Yet, you choose to write something different, totally unique to what is usually done. Good job on that.
I find myself wondering why he was crying. Was it something specific or the burden of constantly needing to be the one who is strong?
Don't tell me, it will probably spoil it :)
8merlinhelzIt is rare to read a story about the dynamic between Ginny and Bill. Ginny is always portrayed in relation to her life at Hogwarts, particularly in relation to the trio. Yet, you choose to write something different, totally unique to what is usually done. Good job on that.
I find myself wondering why he was crying. Was it something specific or the burden of constantly needing to be the one who is strong?
Don't tell me, it will probably spoil it :)
9/24/2009 c1 4Ravenclaw's Redhead
I didn't cry! -sniffles- WAHH!
Anyhoo, it was really well-written and descriptive and showed lots of emotion. -claps- Well done, Fernie!
4Ravenclaw's RedheadI didn't cry! -sniffles- WAHH!
Anyhoo, it was really well-written and descriptive and showed lots of emotion. -claps- Well done, Fernie!
9/24/2009 c1 5SullieBee
Aw...(sniff, blows nose). So...sweet...I really liked this story. It was a bit OOC (as you said) but I liked it a lot. There comes a time in all of our lives that we are forced to believe something we don;t want to believe, and you showed that perfectly. Thank you.
5SullieBeeAw...(sniff, blows nose). So...sweet...I really liked this story. It was a bit OOC (as you said) but I liked it a lot. There comes a time in all of our lives that we are forced to believe something we don;t want to believe, and you showed that perfectly. Thank you.
9/24/2009 c1 7Bamberrr.x
Wow! I'm afraid you didn't make me cry but it did make me think things through from another perspective! See I'm the youngest but I find in this story I can associate more with Bill... Having to stay strong for my family knowing that some things I can do will tear them apart, I have always been the stronger one out of the two of us sorry know this was a random reveiw. Keep writing! x
7Bamberrr.xWow! I'm afraid you didn't make me cry but it did make me think things through from another perspective! See I'm the youngest but I find in this story I can associate more with Bill... Having to stay strong for my family knowing that some things I can do will tear them apart, I have always been the stronger one out of the two of us sorry know this was a random reveiw. Keep writing! x
9/24/2009 c1 19BittyBlueEyes
It was very sweet, very original. A nice peek into the Weasley family.
I didn't cry... but I'm also an eldest child. I know how it can be sometimes. Being strong not only for younger siblings, but also for your parents. And not only am I eldest child, but eldest grandchild.
I know how Bill feels always being the first to split the family... this actually hits very close to home because I just had to break the news to my family that I'm only going to be able to go to Christmas every other year. The whole extended family is devastated... *sigh*
Thank you for sharing this. It was beautiful.
19BittyBlueEyesIt was very sweet, very original. A nice peek into the Weasley family.
I didn't cry... but I'm also an eldest child. I know how it can be sometimes. Being strong not only for younger siblings, but also for your parents. And not only am I eldest child, but eldest grandchild.
I know how Bill feels always being the first to split the family... this actually hits very close to home because I just had to break the news to my family that I'm only going to be able to go to Christmas every other year. The whole extended family is devastated... *sigh*
Thank you for sharing this. It was beautiful.