for A child in me A Thief King Bakura story5/21/2013 c5 
29ChibiPhoenix13
Wow, continue this, even if the grammar's a bit bad, but who really cares about it? It's a good story!
29ChibiPhoenix13Wow, continue this, even if the grammar's a bit bad, but who really cares about it? It's a good story!
12/19/2012 c5 roseofnoonvale
This story shows potential, but there are a good bit of grammer errors that needs to be fixed. Other than that, i love the plot idea.
This story shows potential, but there are a good bit of grammer errors that needs to be fixed. Other than that, i love the plot idea.
7/26/2012 c1 14DarkspiritYami
Very interesting I have to say, your portrayal is interesting to say the least, I like the idea of bakura being innocent like Ryou looking forward to seeing more of your work
Darkspirityami
14DarkspiritYamiVery interesting I have to say, your portrayal is interesting to say the least, I like the idea of bakura being innocent like Ryou looking forward to seeing more of your work
Darkspirityami
9/25/2009 c1 4moonray9
Interesting idea, though you misspelled quite a few things. Try and add more detail too! Please continue soon!
4moonray9Interesting idea, though you misspelled quite a few things. Try and add more detail too! Please continue soon!
9/25/2009 c1 42Shuichi Saito
Good, gt me hooked but I would move it to the right section before you get flamers.
This is a catagory for the manga +Anima, either move it to the right section or if this is your own work move it to
42Shuichi SaitoGood, gt me hooked but I would move it to the right section before you get flamers.
This is a catagory for the manga +Anima, either move it to the right section or if this is your own work move it to