
5/17/2010 c4
4forever - a i n e
when I saw END my heart skipped a beat - end of the chapter!
nice story you have here, update soon!

when I saw END my heart skipped a beat - end of the chapter!
nice story you have here, update soon!
3/12/2010 c4
1itsolive
That was awesome!
Letme try to answer:
Very
Alot!
Yes! As long as they don't smell like them.

That was awesome!
Letme try to answer:
Very
Alot!
Yes! As long as they don't smell like them.
2/26/2010 c4
16Akizakura202
Hola! So, I finally got around to reviewing XD It's much nicer reading it on the site than in Word or E-mails, for some reason . . . ever notice that?
As for the whale's panties thing . . . I have no idea XD But those'd be some pretty bid panties. Well, for a humpback whale. An orca or a beluga whale would be smaller.

Hola! So, I finally got around to reviewing XD It's much nicer reading it on the site than in Word or E-mails, for some reason . . . ever notice that?
As for the whale's panties thing . . . I have no idea XD But those'd be some pretty bid panties. Well, for a humpback whale. An orca or a beluga whale would be smaller.
2/21/2010 c4
3narcotic-lullaby
Hm...this chapter's very mysterious; I 'm very interested to see what's gonna happen next. Please update soon!

Hm...this chapter's very mysterious; I 'm very interested to see what's gonna happen next. Please update soon!
1/20/2010 c3
3narcotic-lullaby
So god! I can't believe you don't update soon enough =( Anyways, hope you get tons of inspiration and you keep writing! ^^ Update soon!

So god! I can't believe you don't update soon enough =( Anyways, hope you get tons of inspiration and you keep writing! ^^ Update soon!
10/5/2009 c2
16Akizakura202
@[email protected] I'm confused. Too many new names! It's good so far, though :)
There were a couple spelling errors here and there, some of which I remember are "strawberry" and you used "knew" instead of "new." So . . . she's a shinigami? If you're gonna reveal stuff like that, it probably shouldn't be so brief XD
Thanks for mentioning me, by the way, and you're welcome! You can refer to me as Aki, though, it's much shorter.

@[email protected] I'm confused. Too many new names! It's good so far, though :)
There were a couple spelling errors here and there, some of which I remember are "strawberry" and you used "knew" instead of "new." So . . . she's a shinigami? If you're gonna reveal stuff like that, it probably shouldn't be so brief XD
Thanks for mentioning me, by the way, and you're welcome! You can refer to me as Aki, though, it's much shorter.
10/4/2009 c2
3narcotic-lullaby
hmm, it was a little bit confusing, but it was intersting. I think you should've added more details in, but other than that it was great. update soon! I wanna see if there's anything going on between Roxas and Hoshi.. =D

hmm, it was a little bit confusing, but it was intersting. I think you should've added more details in, but other than that it was great. update soon! I wanna see if there's anything going on between Roxas and Hoshi.. =D
9/25/2009 c1
16Akizakura202
Not bad . . . I'm pretty confused and it was kinda short, so I can't really say much XD

Not bad . . . I'm pretty confused and it was kinda short, so I can't really say much XD