for At First Sight7/19/2010 c1 
7AmericanFairy
Oh wow, I have to admit that when I first started reading this I wasn't expecting it to be this good. I'm so glad that you proved me wrong! This was a lovely piece and it was most certainly Dr. MacNeill through and through. Wonderful job!
7AmericanFairyOh wow, I have to admit that when I first started reading this I wasn't expecting it to be this good. I'm so glad that you proved me wrong! This was a lovely piece and it was most certainly Dr. MacNeill through and through. Wonderful job!
10/18/2009 c1 Angelatil
I liked this story from Neil's point of view. I always wondered what he thought of her in the beginning. I hope you do other scenes he had with Christy from his point of view. We hear how Christy was always confused about him and fell in love with him, but it would be nice to read some of those same scenes from Neil's point of view and see how he fell in love with her too. I hope you write more!
I liked this story from Neil's point of view. I always wondered what he thought of her in the beginning. I hope you do other scenes he had with Christy from his point of view. We hear how Christy was always confused about him and fell in love with him, but it would be nice to read some of those same scenes from Neil's point of view and see how he fell in love with her too. I hope you write more!
9/30/2009 c1 3LWallace
Thanks so much for your comments. They were thorough . . . I appreciate that!
The one shot aspect is one of my favorites.
Thanks for the encouragement-I am hoping to write more!
3LWallaceThanks so much for your comments. They were thorough . . . I appreciate that!
The one shot aspect is one of my favorites.
Thanks for the encouragement-I am hoping to write more!
9/28/2009 c1 1bgm76
Great story! I really like how you included Fairlight saying she had a dream about the new school teacher coming. I forgot about her saying that in the series. I also liked how the story is in Neil's perspective and gives us more insight into his thoughts. I hope you continue to write more!
1bgm76Great story! I really like how you included Fairlight saying she had a dream about the new school teacher coming. I forgot about her saying that in the series. I also liked how the story is in Neil's perspective and gives us more insight into his thoughts. I hope you continue to write more!
9/28/2009 c1 7grayskies29
I had come across your story while browsing the christy message board and I'm glad you posted it here as well. I think its a great story. I also like the one-shot aspect too. You just never have any idea where or when the chapter ones will finish. It is wonderful to see some fresh takes on the Christy story. I like that this story is from Neil's perspective because he's got a lot of story to tell. I hope you write more.
7grayskies29I had come across your story while browsing the christy message board and I'm glad you posted it here as well. I think its a great story. I also like the one-shot aspect too. You just never have any idea where or when the chapter ones will finish. It is wonderful to see some fresh takes on the Christy story. I like that this story is from Neil's perspective because he's got a lot of story to tell. I hope you write more.