for Harry Potter and the Price of Being Noble3/27 c41 Jiro
This chapter really showed how idiotic potter has been on his battles because of his dumbass gryffindor mindset of not being a coward. Big difference between being a coward and being stupid.
This chapter really showed how idiotic potter has been on his battles because of his dumbass gryffindor mindset of not being a coward. Big difference between being a coward and being stupid.
3/27 c23 Jiro
Harry giving the map to anyone at all for whatever reason is extremely frustrating. Its supposed to be a practically heirloom and hes giving it? Man id like to bitch slap this harry in the face
Harry giving the map to anyone at all for whatever reason is extremely frustrating. Its supposed to be a practically heirloom and hes giving it? Man id like to bitch slap this harry in the face
3/17 c1 spacecowboy2011
When i saw future’s past update last year, I was somewhat hoping life had allowed you the time to write more. It is beyond words just how disappointing it is that both of your stories are ao wonderful, but so much unknown as to whether we will ever see more of them.
When i saw future’s past update last year, I was somewhat hoping life had allowed you the time to write more. It is beyond words just how disappointing it is that both of your stories are ao wonderful, but so much unknown as to whether we will ever see more of them.
3/3 c2 Michael Mancell
I think someone on wednovel may be stealing your work. It’s called Harry Potter Veela’s Embrace. They only just recently made their account it seems and yours is several years older. The account is ScarlettRose00 chapter one and most of chapter two is word for word(at that point I realized I recognized the story) I wanted to let you know since your story is older.
I think someone on wednovel may be stealing your work. It’s called Harry Potter Veela’s Embrace. They only just recently made their account it seems and yours is several years older. The account is ScarlettRose00 chapter one and most of chapter two is word for word(at that point I realized I recognized the story) I wanted to let you know since your story is older.
3/1 c52 Kitten Arina
It saddens me that there hasn’t been an update to this story in a long period of time.
It saddens me that there hasn’t been an update to this story in a long period of time.
2/10 c1 zaniarein247
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Your story "Harry Potter and the Price of Being Noble" is a masterpiece waiting to be seen With its rich world compelling characters and gripping plot it deserves more than just words on a page it deserves to be visualized
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1/31 c30 Mutant Ascension
Once again with the complete and utter horse c*** explanations for dumbledore's actions really? if he trained Harry how to actually fight and defend himself and defeat his enemies it may hinder higher special power. Seriously? That actually made sense to you when you wrote this as I said your explanations to try to make his actions seem benevolent only looks stupid like how dumb do you think the people reading this are? The answer is dumbledore did not try to train Harry because he always intended for him to die that is why. And I must say your depictions of James and Lily is extremely interested 2 people who were said to love their child so much Lily who loved her child so much he happily gave up her life for him just Happily accepted Dumbledore's actions against their child. You have literally turned James and lily into 2 little versions of hagrid 2 Idiots That are blindly loyal to dumbledore even their own child peril in comparison to their loyalty to dumbledore that is what you've turned 2 great people into. When as I said don't worry I could have done multiple things this man is one of the most powerful wizards in the world and I'm quite sure he knows a multitude of capable people in other countries heck he could have given Harris to the Flamel's to take care of and cast a Fidelius charm on their home and made Himself secret keeper and just like that how it would have been perfectly safe. And now Harry easily forgives the old man that he has been plopping his death since he was 1.
Once again with the complete and utter horse c*** explanations for dumbledore's actions really? if he trained Harry how to actually fight and defend himself and defeat his enemies it may hinder higher special power. Seriously? That actually made sense to you when you wrote this as I said your explanations to try to make his actions seem benevolent only looks stupid like how dumb do you think the people reading this are? The answer is dumbledore did not try to train Harry because he always intended for him to die that is why. And I must say your depictions of James and Lily is extremely interested 2 people who were said to love their child so much Lily who loved her child so much he happily gave up her life for him just Happily accepted Dumbledore's actions against their child. You have literally turned James and lily into 2 little versions of hagrid 2 Idiots That are blindly loyal to dumbledore even their own child peril in comparison to their loyalty to dumbledore that is what you've turned 2 great people into. When as I said don't worry I could have done multiple things this man is one of the most powerful wizards in the world and I'm quite sure he knows a multitude of capable people in other countries heck he could have given Harris to the Flamel's to take care of and cast a Fidelius charm on their home and made Himself secret keeper and just like that how it would have been perfectly safe. And now Harry easily forgives the old man that he has been plopping his death since he was 1.
1/31 c29 Mutant Ascension
Man you sure made the DMLE and Amelia bones seemed like a useless waste of face. After an experience like that the only logical conclusion Harry should come to if that magical Britain is worthless that they deserve what they get he should pack up take all his money and move to either magical friends or honestly it doesn't matter some other magical country one more competent than magical Britain. It makes no sense that he is wasting his time fighting for these people he should leave go train and then when it comes time gets his revenge for his parents but as for all of the people that are Going to get tortured and killed by voldemort and his followers that is their own problem not his. If the refuse to fight they deserve their fate.
Man you sure made the DMLE and Amelia bones seemed like a useless waste of face. After an experience like that the only logical conclusion Harry should come to if that magical Britain is worthless that they deserve what they get he should pack up take all his money and move to either magical friends or honestly it doesn't matter some other magical country one more competent than magical Britain. It makes no sense that he is wasting his time fighting for these people he should leave go train and then when it comes time gets his revenge for his parents but as for all of the people that are Going to get tortured and killed by voldemort and his followers that is their own problem not his. If the refuse to fight they deserve their fate.
1/31 c27 Mutant Ascension
The stupid crop authors come up with to explain away dumbledore being a manipulator f***** that did not give a s*** about Harry is hilarious, Dumbledore did not care about Harry even in the books he only saw him as a tool in order to defeat Baldwin that is it a pig raised to be slaughtered at the right time. Put them in with the dress leases a perfect example of that he knew exactly what they were even Minerva made it clear what they were and for someone who has experience all that he has that they should have known how bad of an idea put in a magical child with abusive muggles would be. Voldemort being raised in an alternate and being abused by muggles is one of the reasons why he is the way he is dumbledore's own sister was abused by mungles and never recovered from it until She was killed most likely by a dome adore himself considering out of the throne of them he was clearly the strongest so he was probably his spell that killed his sister. But then again since he's raising Harry to die in the first place who cares if Harry became a not a voldemort he wouldn't live long enough to become what voldemort did cause he already planned his death. I'm not gonna say that dumbledore didn't have the greater good in mind he certainly did but Harry was never a part of that greater good he did not care if he had to sacrifice one innocent child because he did start planning harry's death from he was 1 and a half years old. But if he has to burn down one single tree in order to save the forest so be it but don't try to make it seem like that's not what he was doing because that's exactly what he did. In fact it's so obvious that what he was doing that your attempts to try to make it seem like he's not only looks stupid. In fact it's not even just Harry that really suffered because of dumbledore put in the bigger picture before the individuals snape is a perfect example of that he's a horrible person and a horrible teacher how many futures were ruined because snape ruined Their potions report I'm pretty sure are ours and mitty witches need to have high marks and potions in order to get that career so the entire time snape has been the potion's teacher at hogwarts owners and many witches and hit wizards and other professions that require high potions marks should have drastically decrease in number but all because of him.
The stupid crop authors come up with to explain away dumbledore being a manipulator f***** that did not give a s*** about Harry is hilarious, Dumbledore did not care about Harry even in the books he only saw him as a tool in order to defeat Baldwin that is it a pig raised to be slaughtered at the right time. Put them in with the dress leases a perfect example of that he knew exactly what they were even Minerva made it clear what they were and for someone who has experience all that he has that they should have known how bad of an idea put in a magical child with abusive muggles would be. Voldemort being raised in an alternate and being abused by muggles is one of the reasons why he is the way he is dumbledore's own sister was abused by mungles and never recovered from it until She was killed most likely by a dome adore himself considering out of the throne of them he was clearly the strongest so he was probably his spell that killed his sister. But then again since he's raising Harry to die in the first place who cares if Harry became a not a voldemort he wouldn't live long enough to become what voldemort did cause he already planned his death. I'm not gonna say that dumbledore didn't have the greater good in mind he certainly did but Harry was never a part of that greater good he did not care if he had to sacrifice one innocent child because he did start planning harry's death from he was 1 and a half years old. But if he has to burn down one single tree in order to save the forest so be it but don't try to make it seem like that's not what he was doing because that's exactly what he did. In fact it's so obvious that what he was doing that your attempts to try to make it seem like he's not only looks stupid. In fact it's not even just Harry that really suffered because of dumbledore put in the bigger picture before the individuals snape is a perfect example of that he's a horrible person and a horrible teacher how many futures were ruined because snape ruined Their potions report I'm pretty sure are ours and mitty witches need to have high marks and potions in order to get that career so the entire time snape has been the potion's teacher at hogwarts owners and many witches and hit wizards and other professions that require high potions marks should have drastically decrease in number but all because of him.
12/18/2024 c30 
13Freddie Rindklip
Madam Bones is doing Malfoy Sr. dirty - not that he isn't deserving...
13Freddie RindklipMadam Bones is doing Malfoy Sr. dirty - not that he isn't deserving...
11/26/2024 c25 2Torquin
oh i thought since moody is captive in the trunk it would show up on the map. and i thought they would find barty crouch jr teaching defense. and will voldemort have access to the bond chat if he resurrects. because blood. i was hoping that they could spot crouch jr leading harry up to his office on the map.
2Torquinoh i thought since moody is captive in the trunk it would show up on the map. and i thought they would find barty crouch jr teaching defense. and will voldemort have access to the bond chat if he resurrects. because blood. i was hoping that they could spot crouch jr leading harry up to his office on the map.
11/1/2024 c52 Erik Penrose
To anyone looking to read this story by looking to the end of chapters for a review summary, know that is what this review is for. I give a tentative recommendation due to how well written the story is and how it tackles the bond in a unique manner, but it is only tentative due to the author's use of deus ex machina to force the conflict and action sequences. A further breakdown of my reservations are below.
This story is incomplete, but I do no feel I wasted my time, it is excellently written and mostly enjoyable. If you are however like me, you may disagree with the authors takes on certain sections. Chapters 43-45 are imo unbearable involving kidnapping and worse (suggested mostly), I feel like JKR, the author got lost in their own plot, and ignored their characters to achieve it. This entire novel has shown these character to not be...to quote Snape...such dunderheads. But they all self sabotage to allow these chapters to exist, Harry reverts completely to canon form, stripping him of all his growth, becomes stupid, infects all his bond mates including Hermione, they all forget their portkeys, that they were all just given, after being drilled by an Auror all day about running away and to always keep the portkeys on themselves. And the worst thing is you can skip it all and have nothing change, and I mean nothing. No one dies (not even the bad guys), no villains are captured, none of the heroes involve have any change (not even Harry's anger issues, nor the adults not telling them things is ever addressed or brought up).
The characters at chapter 42 and 46 have had zero change, they had their growth in this novel stripped away from them to force them into danger, then 'grow' back up to where they were to start, but only after a harrowing experience that they would have avoided anyways. But anytime you read 42,000 words and nothing changes but your heart rate it is a very missed opportunity. There is a sign of this in the story before, Chapter 27: The Graveyard Finally. The author showed how many ways the characters, smarter and better now than before could have prevented it, teased by letting them each just about stop it but only too late, but it was contrived to happen, they should have all acted sooner, none should have delayed, and there were no reasons to for any of them to do so.
This does not mean I regret reading, no I enjoyed it mostly, but it was skim reading for some parts which is a shame. I only look forward to the way the author has the interpersonal relationships between the pairings as it is a treat and well written. But the 'action' sequences feel unnatural to me, always forced into existence.
JKR had to make every adult in the entire wizarding world evil or incompetent to allow for Harry Potter to have to be the hero, authors tend to forget this when they write ones who are competent, that the dangers Harry faces can't come out of the same level of machinations that JKR could get away with.
Still I do not regret reading this story, just lament they did not make light of the Dark Lord like they did in HP and the Champion's Champion. They write comedy quite well, and treating the dark lord in a less serious manner would allow them to explore the bond far more than just kidnapping them over and over again.
To anyone looking to read this story by looking to the end of chapters for a review summary, know that is what this review is for. I give a tentative recommendation due to how well written the story is and how it tackles the bond in a unique manner, but it is only tentative due to the author's use of deus ex machina to force the conflict and action sequences. A further breakdown of my reservations are below.
This story is incomplete, but I do no feel I wasted my time, it is excellently written and mostly enjoyable. If you are however like me, you may disagree with the authors takes on certain sections. Chapters 43-45 are imo unbearable involving kidnapping and worse (suggested mostly), I feel like JKR, the author got lost in their own plot, and ignored their characters to achieve it. This entire novel has shown these character to not be...to quote Snape...such dunderheads. But they all self sabotage to allow these chapters to exist, Harry reverts completely to canon form, stripping him of all his growth, becomes stupid, infects all his bond mates including Hermione, they all forget their portkeys, that they were all just given, after being drilled by an Auror all day about running away and to always keep the portkeys on themselves. And the worst thing is you can skip it all and have nothing change, and I mean nothing. No one dies (not even the bad guys), no villains are captured, none of the heroes involve have any change (not even Harry's anger issues, nor the adults not telling them things is ever addressed or brought up).
The characters at chapter 42 and 46 have had zero change, they had their growth in this novel stripped away from them to force them into danger, then 'grow' back up to where they were to start, but only after a harrowing experience that they would have avoided anyways. But anytime you read 42,000 words and nothing changes but your heart rate it is a very missed opportunity. There is a sign of this in the story before, Chapter 27: The Graveyard Finally. The author showed how many ways the characters, smarter and better now than before could have prevented it, teased by letting them each just about stop it but only too late, but it was contrived to happen, they should have all acted sooner, none should have delayed, and there were no reasons to for any of them to do so.
This does not mean I regret reading, no I enjoyed it mostly, but it was skim reading for some parts which is a shame. I only look forward to the way the author has the interpersonal relationships between the pairings as it is a treat and well written. But the 'action' sequences feel unnatural to me, always forced into existence.
JKR had to make every adult in the entire wizarding world evil or incompetent to allow for Harry Potter to have to be the hero, authors tend to forget this when they write ones who are competent, that the dangers Harry faces can't come out of the same level of machinations that JKR could get away with.
Still I do not regret reading this story, just lament they did not make light of the Dark Lord like they did in HP and the Champion's Champion. They write comedy quite well, and treating the dark lord in a less serious manner would allow them to explore the bond far more than just kidnapping them over and over again.