for More Than A Wand12/30/2009 c1 
9Nira Rose
...this would make an interesting fic. especially if Vaati starts liking his wielder a bit more. XD
9Nira Rose...this would make an interesting fic. especially if Vaati starts liking his wielder a bit more. XD
11/14/2009 c4 48ChocolateTeapot
I really like the idea of Vaati being locked up in the Wind Waker.
I feel that there should be a bit more description. It’s sometimes pretty hard to figure out what happened.
A couple of the names are wrong. The Sage of Earth is called “Medli” and it’s “Windfall Island”, not “Windmill Island.”
Your characterization of Vaati is great.
48ChocolateTeapotI really like the idea of Vaati being locked up in the Wind Waker.
I feel that there should be a bit more description. It’s sometimes pretty hard to figure out what happened.
A couple of the names are wrong. The Sage of Earth is called “Medli” and it’s “Windfall Island”, not “Windmill Island.”
Your characterization of Vaati is great.
10/17/2009 c1 Sue Axel
Finally I am not the only one who thought the Wind Waker had something to do with Vaati! :D
Finally I am not the only one who thought the Wind Waker had something to do with Vaati! :D
10/15/2009 c4 3CrimsonDarkness 0013
XD You would make a good villain! Then again, so would me and Rai *shifty eyes* Let's be partners in crime! XD
Rai- NI! *accidentally blows up Hyrule castle*...YAY!
XD Keep it up!
3CrimsonDarkness 0013XD You would make a good villain! Then again, so would me and Rai *shifty eyes* Let's be partners in crime! XD
Rai- NI! *accidentally blows up Hyrule castle*...YAY!
XD Keep it up!
10/14/2009 c4 3S.R.H. Fade
Agh, you got me! I really did think that it was real...
For the title, shouldn't it be More THAN A Wand, rather than More THEN A Wand?
Kind of fillerish chapter, but that's okay. :)
3S.R.H. FadeAgh, you got me! I really did think that it was real...
For the title, shouldn't it be More THAN A Wand, rather than More THEN A Wand?
Kind of fillerish chapter, but that's okay. :)
10/14/2009 c4 10Jayadragon
haha stupid ganondorf
but i guess ganondorf doesn't think that far ahead
i would hate to wake up from that dream...poor vaati
oh well i guess he did get some info from that dream...'cause link doesn't have the master sword so couldn't vaati still break free?
anyway very entertaining chap.
made me smile...vaati is so much fun especially your vaati
its so sad when he dies in fourswords adventures i hate beating him...
i would say this chap was a job well done
10Jayadragonhaha stupid ganondorf
but i guess ganondorf doesn't think that far ahead
i would hate to wake up from that dream...poor vaati
oh well i guess he did get some info from that dream...'cause link doesn't have the master sword so couldn't vaati still break free?
anyway very entertaining chap.
made me smile...vaati is so much fun especially your vaati
its so sad when he dies in fourswords adventures i hate beating him...
i would say this chap was a job well done
10/1/2009 c3 Jayadragon
yeah his victory dance is funny as shit...by way medili is spelled Medli
if you ever want to sheck up on a facts for zelda you can just use zeldapedia or zelda wiki
very helpful sites^^
i like Your Vaati he is awsome ^^...is he gunna be one of those good guys bad guys or a bad guy bad guy...if that made any sense...
anywho very entertaining chap...well done
yeah his victory dance is funny as shit...by way medili is spelled Medli
if you ever want to sheck up on a facts for zelda you can just use zeldapedia or zelda wiki
very helpful sites^^
i like Your Vaati he is awsome ^^...is he gunna be one of those good guys bad guys or a bad guy bad guy...if that made any sense...
anywho very entertaining chap...well done
10/1/2009 c3 3CrimsonDarkness 0013
XD
Rai- Shorty Vaati! :D
This is too good! Keep it up! *playing DS* Stupid Lexeaus! Narly kill me again why don't you!
3CrimsonDarkness 0013XD
Rai- Shorty Vaati! :D
This is too good! Keep it up! *playing DS* Stupid Lexeaus! Narly kill me again why don't you!
9/30/2009 c2 4infinitysphere
Great chapter!
And i'm not a she.
You can use line breaks wherever you're not having characters speak. Or if you have a normal sentence after a speech, keep them on the same line. Sorry if I sound too confusing.
4infinitysphereGreat chapter!
And i'm not a she.
You can use line breaks wherever you're not having characters speak. Or if you have a normal sentence after a speech, keep them on the same line. Sorry if I sound too confusing.
9/30/2009 c2 3CrimsonDarkness 0013
Good ol' Vaati! XD Keep it up!
Rai- We're reviewing ALL your stories! XD
3CrimsonDarkness 0013Good ol' Vaati! XD Keep it up!
Rai- We're reviewing ALL your stories! XD
9/29/2009 c2 10Jayadragon
that is an amazing idea...vaati is the windwaker...such an epic idea...i congratulate you on your amazingness.
i like the idea...i also love the humor of the second chapt. short to the point, some laughs...well done.
i'll be waiting for more
10Jayadragonthat is an amazing idea...vaati is the windwaker...such an epic idea...i congratulate you on your amazingness.
i like the idea...i also love the humor of the second chapt. short to the point, some laughs...well done.
i'll be waiting for more
9/29/2009 c1 4infinitysphere
Make it a fanfic! Definitely.
Great work. Try using line breaks instead of new paragraphs (press Shift Enter instead of Enter) so that your story is a little easier to read.
You could make Vaati break out, and then he could go against Link (Wind Waker redone) or have a change of heart and help him (Wind Waker redone again).
4infinitysphereMake it a fanfic! Definitely.
Great work. Try using line breaks instead of new paragraphs (press Shift Enter instead of Enter) so that your story is a little easier to read.
You could make Vaati break out, and then he could go against Link (Wind Waker redone) or have a change of heart and help him (Wind Waker redone again).
9/28/2009 c1 3S.R.H. Fade
I can certainly see this becoming a chapter story, and I would think that it'd be something definitely worth reading. And dang, I never thought of Vaati and the Windwaker...
3S.R.H. FadeI can certainly see this becoming a chapter story, and I would think that it'd be something definitely worth reading. And dang, I never thought of Vaati and the Windwaker...