for Lost7/29/2016 c1 ZNami 4ever
Oh wonderful happy ending like it
Oh wonderful happy ending like it
8/4/2014 c1 Ice
You arent a true One Piece fan. Its Robin, not Robyn.
You arent a true One Piece fan. Its Robin, not Robyn.
6/9/2013 c1 
26navitor3
A very sweet story. I love Zoro coming home to Nami and their child. His family. :)
26navitor3A very sweet story. I love Zoro coming home to Nami and their child. His family. :)
5/15/2012 c1 2DistantDreamerX
This was good, but I don't really understand something... unless I'm mistaken, Zoro seemed like he was trying, like, really trying to stay close to her and everything, and SHE was the one pushing him away and trying to slam doors in his face. So... why did that girl, Robin, slap Zoro? I mean, unless it was to set the story and all, but... I dunno, if I was in Robin's place, I think I would've tried to slap some sense into Nami, for continuing to push away a man who was trying to reach her [be it by holding her, or giving her space, because it seemed obvious that she didn't want him around]. I dunno, maybe he was working a lot or something, but I didn't get that idea, because that Robin girl said that Nami left because Zoro was putting her ahead of his dream, so... I didn't really get it.
Poor men, they never can win with women haha.
Anyway, I enjoyed reading it, especially because it reminded me of one of my all-time favorite songs by Michael.
2DistantDreamerXThis was good, but I don't really understand something... unless I'm mistaken, Zoro seemed like he was trying, like, really trying to stay close to her and everything, and SHE was the one pushing him away and trying to slam doors in his face. So... why did that girl, Robin, slap Zoro? I mean, unless it was to set the story and all, but... I dunno, if I was in Robin's place, I think I would've tried to slap some sense into Nami, for continuing to push away a man who was trying to reach her [be it by holding her, or giving her space, because it seemed obvious that she didn't want him around]. I dunno, maybe he was working a lot or something, but I didn't get that idea, because that Robin girl said that Nami left because Zoro was putting her ahead of his dream, so... I didn't really get it.
Poor men, they never can win with women haha.
Anyway, I enjoyed reading it, especially because it reminded me of one of my all-time favorite songs by Michael.
1/17/2011 c1 12ParanoiaQueen
I really enjoyed this story, I thought the part about the milk at the end was a bit strange and ruined the mood but over all it was a great story and I really love the little girl
12ParanoiaQueenI really enjoyed this story, I thought the part about the milk at the end was a bit strange and ruined the mood but over all it was a great story and I really love the little girl
7/14/2010 c1 3missDluvsIchigo0493
Whoa, this was really good, and very touching! Keep writing more ZoNas please!
3missDluvsIchigo0493Whoa, this was really good, and very touching! Keep writing more ZoNas please!
10/28/2009 c1 11Green-san
Naw... It was pretty good, just think that Nami should use some "!" when Zoro comes ^^
Would feel more realistic and her then
11Green-sanNaw... It was pretty good, just think that Nami should use some "!" when Zoro comes ^^
Would feel more realistic and her then
9/29/2009 c1 BlueLion
The plot idea's well enough, I don't think a prologue is necessary - an epilogue may be fine though - preferably one including Marni ...
Your orthography needs a lot of improvement though - try to get a betareader!
The plot idea's well enough, I don't think a prologue is necessary - an epilogue may be fine though - preferably one including Marni ...
Your orthography needs a lot of improvement though - try to get a betareader!
9/28/2009 c1 HatakeHinata
Oh mah gods! One of the best best best ZoNa fanfics I have ever read. Loved it!
Oh mah gods! One of the best best best ZoNa fanfics I have ever read. Loved it!
9/28/2009 c1 Far away yet so near
Really nice story! I love Michael Buble so I liked how you used the lyrics to this story. An epilogue would be nice, but it breaks my heart when I read a so sad story so please try to make it a little more happy!
ZoNa is my favourite pairing and it's nice to see that there are other people who like it. Thanks!
Have a nice day! ;-)
P.S. If you write anything else M rated ZoNa based, a bit more smut would be very nice to read! (I'm a little perv XD)
Really nice story! I love Michael Buble so I liked how you used the lyrics to this story. An epilogue would be nice, but it breaks my heart when I read a so sad story so please try to make it a little more happy!
ZoNa is my favourite pairing and it's nice to see that there are other people who like it. Thanks!
Have a nice day! ;-)
P.S. If you write anything else M rated ZoNa based, a bit more smut would be very nice to read! (I'm a little perv XD)