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12/7/2013 c1 10Wordspin
Quite lovely, with such wonderful imagery. The sadness of separation and the elation of reunion were beautifully rendered.
2/6/2010 c1 23ziggy3
This was very nicely balanced between the elation of being reunited and the heartbreak of separation. Elrond's pov is beautifully and sensitively written, with that understanding of the theme of opposites and twins and loss that Tolkien creates. Very nicely written I have to say.
12/1/2009 c1 Emily
You were right, the alternate ending is quite sad. : ( However, I have decided to disregard it, so that's all right, then. : )

The rest of your story is quite nice too, of course. I especially liked the idea of an Eagle for a messenger. I don't think it's probable, but it's still a good idea. : )
10/1/2009 c1 134Jedi Sapphire
Lovely.
10/1/2009 c1 1Nessa Ar-Fieneil
both the endings were very well written

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