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6/20 c6 D program
Pretty please update! You promised! :'(
4/18 c6 Reidite88
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2/12 c1 8purplerose97
It's interesting and a very different take on things than I was expecting. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
2/27/2019 c6 17Cluckster
Devastated.
I am devastated there’s no more.
This was pure brilliance. Everyone’s character was perfect. Every interaction was perfect.
Also, this chapter punched me straight in the feels a couple of times.
I wish I could see them get together and discover the truth. See Mako fall for Noel, see how Zach plans on seducing Ami, see Jared realize there’s no ire like Rei’s, & best of all see Ceithin heal Minako’s heart.
But even without all that, I loved this story. It was well written. The perfect beginning to a slow burn.
Thanks for writing it!
2/27/2019 c5 Cluckster
This was hilarious and cute! Even though it had minimal to no romantic interactions it was still had me completely enraptured. I'm SO SAD there's only one chapter left. But I seriously love this fic regardless. Thankfully, I was at home for most of this chapter so I could laugh out loud to my heart's content. There was a lot of laughter lolol I'm very excited to keep reading : )
2/26/2019 c4 Cluckster
SO MUCH!
I legit skipped lunch with my friends to eat alone so I could read hahaha!
ZACH’S AN ASS. I hope Ami rips into him. I hope MINAKO rips into him. But I also feel a horrible childhood backstory coming up and I worry Lolol
Every other couple, however, DA FEELS!
I’d Iike to write an essay about every part I absolutely loved, but I that would take hours. Days. And my lunch break is almost over. AGH I need to keep reading!
2/25/2019 c3 Cluckster
Okay. I had to smother the giant HA! I wanted to yell out at the last couple of sentences because I'm in public. LMAOOO
Oh, I loved this chapter. I love the interactions and Rei & Jared are so sweet! I like that he's not trying to piss her off and that she likes him against her own will and is trying to impress him. It's very sweet and very natural.
Being a giant MK fan I LOVED this chapter. The suspense of when will they meet? And the adorably horrible way they do meet. Oh! And Usagi's reaction to Ceithin LMAOOOO And Minako's quiet surprise at what he looks like after all her assumptions. LOVE IT. I seriously don't know how I never read this. * rushes to next chapter *
2/24/2019 c2 Cluckster
Okay. I have NO idea how I’ve never read this. It’s AMAZING. I love everyone’s personalities and their dynamics are so perfect. I can’t wait til they meet. But I so appreciate the relationship developments between everyone. I love that Mamoru is getting to cement his brotherhood before introducing the girls. The pacing is perfect. Poor Minako! Freaking Ace! I love to hate him! Haha! I’m interested in what happened to distance Rei from Mina & the rest. Can’t wait to keep reading!
10/8/2018 c5 ameriar
I know I already reviewed your story a while back but it stuck with me so much I couldn't help thinking about it. All the fanfiction I read after your story - I compared then to yours. And none of them were as good as yours. You're brilliant!

Few random thoughts:

MASSIVE ERECTION XD classic!

I wish I had such a full and entertaining uni years as they have! #jealous

The way Zach is behaving towards EVERYONE is abysmal! But the moment he's with Mamoru - he acts like a nice guy. Is it because he feels and subconsciously knows that he's something more than a student and housemate? But he's still getting on my nerves and I just can't wait for him to change (and HOW will he change) to be a better person.

Amy and Jared? Nope, nope, nope. This gets me even more interested how is Zach going to win her over. It won't be pretty I assume.

BUT "who I am, I know what I've done and I know what I deserve. Nothing is going to change that. There is no power in this world that can." is this hinting on something from the past? As in - shady, Dark Kingdom past? :D

On completely different note - I wish Usagi would be more inclined towards white and silver. This is how I imagine her (preferring white to pink when it comes to clothing) - not bright colours and pink (ugh!) but pastel, muted colours and a bit more regal poise. Chibiusa is the pink one. But I still find your Usagi endearing and cute!

Also - the scene where Minako nuzzled with Usagi when she was hangover? Most realistic and cute scene ever! I can't remember the times I thought my friend's / sister's (she's my best friend) bed seemed like the best place to stay after a night of partying!

I love the interactions between everyone! It's so great that you don't just close them to just talking and hanging out as couples. My favourite ones must be when you take Usagi and any of the Shittenou. So adorable! Also speaking of Shittenou - I wonder where are the stones... You mentioned in chapter 1 that they still "visit" Mamoru as the manga said. But how are they in relation to the guys? Are the stones and their spirits just a manifestation of their powers? So many questions!

I can't help feeling that your story is totally unappreciated in the community! It's one of the greatest, most mature, funny and realistic portrayal of what could have happened after Galaxia that I've ever read! And I've been reading SM fanfiction for 20 years now! The things you make them go through (ex. Makoto feeling that it was way too soon for her to do it, and the circumstances around it) seem like they could easily happen to any of us. You mix the normal life and their supernatural gifts so well I just can't get enough of it!

The only thing that is making me really sad about this story is how slowly it progresses :( With 1 chapter per year on average, it means before before they finish one year it will take like 30 years... :( And it's only been less than a week in their lives! Hope you won't abandon this story! I'm sure I'll be rereading it once again in a few months and then again and again!

Lots of love! xx You're the best!
8/15/2018 c3 Guest
My face hurts for laughing too much.
7/28/2018 c6 ameriar
One of the BEST STORIES EVER! I can't believe I didn't come upon this story sooner!

I really hope you will pick this up! It's great! The best! Hilarious and surprising and everything I love about fanfiction! You're a great author!
xxx
6/25/2018 c6 13Adrianna Sharp
Awwwww. I'm so sad this is over. I really hope you come back to this story at some point. It's so fantastic. I just want to wrap up Makoto in a blanket and hug her. I love your development with her. It's so real and painful and I just want to see everyone happy together. The ellorgast reference was fantastic and I couldn't stop laughing when she talked about Neil. Also, I love that Ceithin is so popular with women. It just makes me laugh. I love this story so much. You've done such a great job with this whole story and I sincerely hope that at some point there's more.
6/25/2018 c5 Adrianna Sharp
I can't believe there's only one chapter left! I really want this story to go on forever. All the cute little things you have for all the pairings is just adorable. Especially for Minako and Ceithin. Love this love this love this!
6/25/2018 c4 Adrianna Sharp
This is so wonderful and beautiful. I love that you've started pairing them off, even if it means that I want to punch Zack in the head so much. Makoto and Noel's chemistry is adorable and I love that it's not everything Makoto wants but it's exactly what she wants. I love that Minako catches them. I love how adorably awkward Minako and Ceithin are. I love how you wrote Rei and Jared. I just love everything so much. And for the love of god, I hope they start to remember.
6/25/2018 c3 Adrianna Sharp
This whole chapter is beautiful and wonderful and I don't ever want this story to end. I adore Minako and Rei's opposite appeals in men. I adore Mamoru being too shy to say "I love you" to Usagi in front of his new friends. I adore all the tension with waiting for Minako to see how hot Ceithin is. I adore the little hints towards flashbacks and that Zach and Jared are getting the attention of Ami's computer. This whole chapter is filled with little seedlings and I can't wait to see how it all pans out. I'M SO EXCITED!
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