for Naruto, the Kiri no Rei9/12/2023 c2 Huh
Bro what?
Bro what?
2/17/2013 c3 
1Toby860
this is something that has been floating around in my mind can Naruto refer to the sanbi as sanbi-ji or san-jiji.
1Toby860this is something that has been floating around in my mind can Naruto refer to the sanbi as sanbi-ji or san-jiji.
3/30/2012 c4 3one.who.reads
It's like a parade of all that is bad fanfiction. You took a good base concept (naruto of kiri), and then everything just went spectacularly wrong.
3one.who.readsIt's like a parade of all that is bad fanfiction. You took a good base concept (naruto of kiri), and then everything just went spectacularly wrong.
3/19/2011 c3 1Kaiba1288
Cool story, Good luck with this looking forward to
reading the rest of the story.
Ja ne
Kaiba1288
1Kaiba1288Cool story, Good luck with this looking forward to
reading the rest of the story.
Ja ne
Kaiba1288
7/28/2010 c3 demonlordnaruto
How about naruto wife be
1 Haku
2 Kaya
3 Fu
4 Mei
5 Yugito
And naruto become the 3 tail J.
How about naruto wife be
1 Haku
2 Kaya
3 Fu
4 Mei
5 Yugito
And naruto become the 3 tail J.
4/5/2010 c3 HatinLife
I have to say, I don't think that I have ever read a Fic that had Kyuubi being sealed into Sasuke and him being the preverbial Naruto. I must say that I like it. I think that Naruto should "adopt" Sasuke into his clan and under his protection since Sasuke was disowned by the Uchiha. Also, who seal the Kyuubi into Sasuke if Minato is still alive? Also, what is Naruto's "Step-Mother's" bloodline because I don't think you mentioned it. Anyway, until your next update. Later.
I have to say, I don't think that I have ever read a Fic that had Kyuubi being sealed into Sasuke and him being the preverbial Naruto. I must say that I like it. I think that Naruto should "adopt" Sasuke into his clan and under his protection since Sasuke was disowned by the Uchiha. Also, who seal the Kyuubi into Sasuke if Minato is still alive? Also, what is Naruto's "Step-Mother's" bloodline because I don't think you mentioned it. Anyway, until your next update. Later.
4/5/2010 c1 HatinLife
Well, I wouldn't use the twin daggers because he technically wouldn't be a swordsman. Ichigo original sword looked a little odd, I guess. So why not a pair of twin swords that channel his elemental affinities and amplify them ten fold? Anyway, onto the next chapter. Later.
Well, I wouldn't use the twin daggers because he technically wouldn't be a swordsman. Ichigo original sword looked a little odd, I guess. So why not a pair of twin swords that channel his elemental affinities and amplify them ten fold? Anyway, onto the next chapter. Later.