
4/21/2010 c1
6zodious
this is a pretty interesting story but ur grammar has a lot of flaws, no offence, i think it could be done better. No offence but nevertheless i liked it.

this is a pretty interesting story but ur grammar has a lot of flaws, no offence, i think it could be done better. No offence but nevertheless i liked it.
2/15/2010 c6
17ELLIE 31773
oh ~ i love the ulquihime more !
Ulquihime is my fav then Aihime last but not least is IchiHime
so its good as Ulqui love Hime in their first live as a shinigame before Aizen slave over Ulqui
^^V i hope you up date asap ok
its good
next time f you want to unbold the word that you have writen just hight light all and then push the bold buton then it will become normal back

oh ~ i love the ulquihime more !
Ulquihime is my fav then Aihime last but not least is IchiHime
so its good as Ulqui love Hime in their first live as a shinigame before Aizen slave over Ulqui
^^V i hope you up date asap ok
its good
next time f you want to unbold the word that you have writen just hight light all and then push the bold buton then it will become normal back
1/3/2010 c5 birdy
Cool story please keep updating and the thing the arrancar come through to go to earth is called a garganta.
Cool story please keep updating and the thing the arrancar come through to go to earth is called a garganta.
12/7/2009 c3 nonexistant55557
I loved this story I thought it was hillarious! Please start updating again because I wanna know what happened. I am a big fan of piority's and I very much like this one :)
I loved this story I thought it was hillarious! Please start updating again because I wanna know what happened. I am a big fan of piority's and I very much like this one :)
10/20/2009 c3
6Craloth
that was a funny chapter... i like HIsagi's and Orihime's relationship.. and ears! yes ! Ichigo got ears! great
“Do you like kittens?” ichigo asked ignoring her question
“Yeah” orihime said not getting his question
Ichigo looked at her evilly
“Lets make some!” he said as he pounced her.
that was hilarious!

that was a funny chapter... i like HIsagi's and Orihime's relationship.. and ears! yes ! Ichigo got ears! great
“Do you like kittens?” ichigo asked ignoring her question
“Yeah” orihime said not getting his question
Ichigo looked at her evilly
“Lets make some!” he said as he pounced her.
that was hilarious!
10/20/2009 c2 Craloth
this chapter was funny...
it would be cute if Ichigo had ears.. kind of reminds me of Inu Yasha
this chapter was funny...
it would be cute if Ichigo had ears.. kind of reminds me of Inu Yasha
10/20/2009 c1 Craloth
Rukia and Ichigo siblings? thats great! and Orihime with tails? funny! it was a nice start but you really cant spell to save your life can you? Nice story but ppl might be discouraged to read it because of the mistakes... so get yourself a beta reader... reviews will come pouring in..
Rukia and Ichigo siblings? thats great! and Orihime with tails? funny! it was a nice start but you really cant spell to save your life can you? Nice story but ppl might be discouraged to read it because of the mistakes... so get yourself a beta reader... reviews will come pouring in..