for I'll Prove it to You10/20/2009 c4 
2Lil Rocker 2kaii9
Please write More, and can you - If you find time to - Read my story 'Darken Dawn' And competition for making a character based on you or a friend to be on mY story. It is a made up story that I made that is like Twilight but different. Hope you write more on your story.
2Lil Rocker 2kaii9Please write More, and can you - If you find time to - Read my story 'Darken Dawn' And competition for making a character based on you or a friend to be on mY story. It is a made up story that I made that is like Twilight but different. Hope you write more on your story.
10/8/2009 c3 FreezingFire81
I think you might want to up their age because if they are in kindergarten they can do half the stuff you said they did. BUT i still loved it! and cant wait to read more!:)
I think you might want to up their age because if they are in kindergarten they can do half the stuff you said they did. BUT i still loved it! and cant wait to read more!:)
10/5/2009 c2 4Yasric M. S
like it so far.. please update soon and please make the chapters longer.. please.. lol
4Yasric M. Slike it so far.. please update soon and please make the chapters longer.. please.. lol
10/3/2009 c1 7Michelle Amethyst
huh. Interesting premise. You got me curious as to how this story is gonna play out. Good luck :)
7Michelle Amethysthuh. Interesting premise. You got me curious as to how this story is gonna play out. Good luck :)
10/3/2009 c1 Bella Bean4
LOve it!
LOve it!