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3/10/2013 c4 23wingedmercury
Hahaha, KYUBI FOR THE WIN! Cute story my dear. And Hinata should take some allergy meds before she goes on another date with Naruto, lol:)
3/10/2013 c3 wingedmercury
Haha, love the ending:) Also, have you watched the Naruto SD? I just thought this chapter could have totally been an episode!
3/10/2013 c2 wingedmercury
Ha, you really have Naruto pegged:) The whole bit with the ramen had me chuckling in the beginning:)
3/10/2013 c1 wingedmercury
Hey girlfriend, FINALLY have some time to sit down and read your fic! Love the first chapter. Hinata is very IC here, and of course, your grammar is impeccable:)
10/9/2010 c4 1wallytheginer
I personally think this should be getting more reviews. This is a lovely naruhina fic.
10/25/2009 c4 6Maimaktes
"Achoo-one size fits everyone

Achoo-one breath, the deed has been done

One for a girl who needs care

I do hope that he makes you well

Say, is there any cure for Hell,

Achoo-one size fits everyone

Achoo-one breath, the deed has been done

Achoo-he's gonna whisk you away

Achoo-he's gonna make you OK "

THANK YOU SO MUCH.

Reading that fic reminded me of an old song (Achoo, by the Sparks). Thank you for making me listen to that song again ; D

NaruHina rules ; D
10/19/2009 c4 21shadowcat012
This was great! I enjoyed reading it very much!
10/12/2009 c4 ayume hime
why oh why ...sneezing!well,it created humour i admit.but still funny.keep up the good work!
10/11/2009 c4 27Demoness of Evil
This whole story was really good, the way you switched between characters thoughts and POV and extremely well written and adds life to this story. I loved it, please continue to write like this!

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