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2/23/2013 c1 2harmonicagranger
Oh my gosh! I played Lucille in TMM! Loved reading your take on my character! :)
7/11/2012 c1 thewhiphand5
That was so so awesome. Thoroughly Modern Millie is one of my favorites and I think you did an amazing job! Keep it up.
8/31/2011 c1 1scarlet luchia
Hi There! I sure am exited to see other Thoroughly Modern Millie lovers! Your story has a good line so far and I will love to read on. I just have a few tips...

Keep it all in the same tense! If you are talking in firt person ( I, Me) keep it that way.

Try to make every sentance opener different. Read the first word in each sentance and if two words reapeat in a paragraph you have to change something.

Lastly, remember you don't have to repeat things so often. If you say "she was exausted." at the end of a paragraph you don't have to say it again in the next we know she still is.

There are a few spelling things but we all have them! We all can learn more everyday, and NO ONES story is perfect (especialy mine. I'm embarresed.)

Keep up the good work!
9/30/2010 c1 6bryswym
i also played lucille last year in thoroughly modern millie! she was a small character that ive always wanted to learn more about. interesting take on lucille and please write more!
9/17/2010 c1 2Jemidancer2011
Oh my gosh I love this! I played Lucille in my school's musical this past year and found this REALLY ironic! I loved it! you should write more! :)
5/15/2010 c1 1Afternoon on a hill
this was adorable. Millie is my favorite musical, especially since iplayed her at my school:) we didnt have a luccilee in ours... but reading this i wish we did
1/2/2010 c1 1aspiringauthor013
That was really good! I love this play and I love the way you gave Lucille a personality. Please make more?
10/5/2009 c1 4panda lover
Good job! It really captured Lucille which we don't know anything about. Makes up her character.

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