
12/8/2011 c1 Alpha0328
Hey can I start a branch story about the cloaked man who tells them about the warehouse?
If I can,could you email me? My email is . Thanks!
Hey can I start a branch story about the cloaked man who tells them about the warehouse?
If I can,could you email me? My email is . Thanks!
4/11/2009 c12 kirby
omg this story was very thrilling especially when there familes are still getting used to wat happened when Jackie said can i be a Raichu too? or when grants brother said can i be a Charzard when i grow up hilarious lol and when trishes mother sat on her tail and when she short circuited the school pure GOLD!
omg this story was very thrilling especially when there familes are still getting used to wat happened when Jackie said can i be a Raichu too? or when grants brother said can i be a Charzard when i grow up hilarious lol and when trishes mother sat on her tail and when she short circuited the school pure GOLD!
8/31/2005 c12 Luhan
SEQEUL! I DEMAND YOU MAKE A SEQUEL NOW OR ELSE I WILL SEND MY VAPOREON TO DESTROY YOU!
hiro: don't mind him... he gets abit estatic when he reads a good story...
SEQEUL! I DEMAND YOU MAKE A SEQUEL NOW OR ELSE I WILL SEND MY VAPOREON TO DESTROY YOU!
hiro: don't mind him... he gets abit estatic when he reads a good story...
6/4/2004 c1 Matt
Wow. That is REALLY good. This is even better than 'POKeGENIE'. (Don't ask). Anyway, you have alot of potential. Keep on going! Oh yeah, I'm a fan of 'morph' stories, soo the only thing I'd brush up on is puntuation. Go you!
Wow. That is REALLY good. This is even better than 'POKeGENIE'. (Don't ask). Anyway, you have alot of potential. Keep on going! Oh yeah, I'm a fan of 'morph' stories, soo the only thing I'd brush up on is puntuation. Go you!
7/17/2003 c12 CedricBale
Err... Is that actually the endof the fic? If so... you could've at least put THE END at the end, ya' know? I've been waiting FOREVER for this thing to get updated, just to find out that that was the end. It kinda' sucks. Not the story, the story's awsome, but the place it where ended wasn't a very good place to stop. Now, if that ISN'T the end... I'd feel like a fool. If that IS the end... SEQUAL PLEASE!
Err... Is that actually the endof the fic? If so... you could've at least put THE END at the end, ya' know? I've been waiting FOREVER for this thing to get updated, just to find out that that was the end. It kinda' sucks. Not the story, the story's awsome, but the place it where ended wasn't a very good place to stop. Now, if that ISN'T the end... I'd feel like a fool. If that IS the end... SEQUAL PLEASE!
10/22/2002 c12 Ken
( '_' )... Wow... Nice way to end it! One word: Sequal. Thanks for Updating! ( ^_^ )
( '_' )... Wow... Nice way to end it! One word: Sequal. Thanks for Updating! ( ^_^ )
10/14/2002 c12
16Lightning-Strike
*gets a tingly sensation all over as she reads the lines of the song* Oooh, good chapter. ME LIKE! Yes, me like lots. ^^ Now, WHERE IS THE SEQUEL!
Lights: *sigh* When will you learn?
LS: Umm...never?
Lights: *sweatdrop*

*gets a tingly sensation all over as she reads the lines of the song* Oooh, good chapter. ME LIKE! Yes, me like lots. ^^ Now, WHERE IS THE SEQUEL!
Lights: *sigh* When will you learn?
LS: Umm...never?
Lights: *sweatdrop*
10/10/2002 c12 Andrewc
one word...awesome
one word...awesome
10/8/2002 c12
69Alex Warlorn
You want review? You got review. Anyway, Trouble DOES have the stones, he could just move his operation somewhere else to build up his collection of slaves.

You want review? You got review. Anyway, Trouble DOES have the stones, he could just move his operation somewhere else to build up his collection of slaves.
10/8/2002 c12
5Perri Lightfoot
Great ending to a great story ! :-) Can't wait to see the sequel - there should be more morphs (can I be one please please?), more danger, more VIOLENCE! ^_^ *huggles fic* I luv it! :-P
~Pink Parka Girl

Great ending to a great story ! :-) Can't wait to see the sequel - there should be more morphs (can I be one please please?), more danger, more VIOLENCE! ^_^ *huggles fic* I luv it! :-P
~Pink Parka Girl
10/8/2002 c12
12nightdragon0
nice! There's still that aspect of unresolved problems through.
Hmm..looking forward to your sequel!

nice! There's still that aspect of unresolved problems through.
Hmm..looking forward to your sequel!
10/7/2002 c11 Ken
UPDATE THIS DAMNIT! (I love this, UPDATE!)
UPDATE THIS DAMNIT! (I love this, UPDATE!)