
9/15/2002 c1 Ken
Good story. Good plot. UPDATE IT! (sorry if that was too short)
Good story. Good plot. UPDATE IT! (sorry if that was too short)
9/13/2002 c11 Ken
FINISH IT!
FINISH IT!
6/12/2002 c1
3Raikou Ryu
*is psyched for the next part* you're right, you should focus more on this one than your other stories

*is psyched for the next part* you're right, you should focus more on this one than your other stories
5/10/2002 c1
4Sierra Akurai
OOO~ This is great! *is reading it for the forth time* It somehow gets more interesting..? o.o;;

OOO~ This is great! *is reading it for the forth time* It somehow gets more interesting..? o.o;;
4/27/2002 c11
16Lightning-Strike
Hey, there! Wow...Luke! Luke is cool...I like Luke...he's really noble, too...he'd better not die! Oh, I hope Trisha saves her family! And I want to know more about the Ancient Mew Warriors! Update soon!

Hey, there! Wow...Luke! Luke is cool...I like Luke...he's really noble, too...he'd better not die! Oh, I hope Trisha saves her family! And I want to know more about the Ancient Mew Warriors! Update soon!
4/26/2002 c11 Kiyo
uhh... lion king rpg, okay
uhh... lion king rpg, okay
4/25/2002 c11
69Alex Warlorn
Uh . . . I'm not sure if it's a bright idea to bring in pokemon mythogly into this. Are we ever going to find anything about Trouble? Just asking. I guess we'll find out soon enough.

Uh . . . I'm not sure if it's a bright idea to bring in pokemon mythogly into this. Are we ever going to find anything about Trouble? Just asking. I guess we'll find out soon enough.
4/7/2002 c10 ZAP
It was pretty good.
It was pretty good.
4/2/2002 c10 IceVector
good chap but theres one thing id like to see more it would be 2 see more luke and maybe some POV of luke too
good chap but theres one thing id like to see more it would be 2 see more luke and maybe some POV of luke too
4/2/2002 c10
16Lightning-Strike
AAAAHHH! I get a cliffhanger last night, now I get ANOTHER one! UPLOAD CHAPTER 11! Please? Who was that last guy? TELL ME! Shoot. I should send Nate over there...if he ever decides to listen to me...*sigh*

AAAAHHH! I get a cliffhanger last night, now I get ANOTHER one! UPLOAD CHAPTER 11! Please? Who was that last guy? TELL ME! Shoot. I should send Nate over there...if he ever decides to listen to me...*sigh*
3/21/2002 c9
38Ireth-Tasartir
i like this story a lot, im enjoyng it, i will always complain about chaptered stories, but its ok. now mistakes, the difference between night and day is passive, you never know when its night and when its day. description, you could have been a little more fluent in descriptions.
personal opinion:I LOVE JOSH, really, Josh is such a cool guy, dont ask me why but my favourite areas are when its in Josh's point of view.
Mizzy

i like this story a lot, im enjoyng it, i will always complain about chaptered stories, but its ok. now mistakes, the difference between night and day is passive, you never know when its night and when its day. description, you could have been a little more fluent in descriptions.
personal opinion:I LOVE JOSH, really, Josh is such a cool guy, dont ask me why but my favourite areas are when its in Josh's point of view.
Mizzy
3/15/2002 c9
16Lightning-Strike
I don't like Trouble. I hope the Kadabra morph doesn't sense Luke. That'd be a problem. Oh, what's gonna happen! TELL ME!

I don't like Trouble. I hope the Kadabra morph doesn't sense Luke. That'd be a problem. Oh, what's gonna happen! TELL ME!