for The Chicken and the Genius10/9/2009 c1 
6Paranoise
omg, that was hilarios, a picture of Artemis Fowl Dancing the chicken dance will forever be a part of me now. Keep up the good work! this is going in my faves!
6Paranoiseomg, that was hilarios, a picture of Artemis Fowl Dancing the chicken dance will forever be a part of me now. Keep up the good work! this is going in my faves!
10/9/2009 c1 18Renata Swift
Oh. My. Gosh! You made me laugh harder than I have in a very long time. Who would've thought that Beckett could be so poetically inspiring? Plus I hate the Chicken Dance, so you get a million points from me for making Artemis dance it. An excellent poem, methinks. Keep up the amazing humor!
18Renata SwiftOh. My. Gosh! You made me laugh harder than I have in a very long time. Who would've thought that Beckett could be so poetically inspiring? Plus I hate the Chicken Dance, so you get a million points from me for making Artemis dance it. An excellent poem, methinks. Keep up the amazing humor!
10/7/2009 c1 Dark Moon Amethyst
i like this story, and it's true, beckett is smarter than people give him credit for.
don't write it in poetry form, it got me confused.
i liked the ending.
i HATE the walrus and the carpenter.
i like this story, and it's true, beckett is smarter than people give him credit for.
don't write it in poetry form, it got me confused.
i liked the ending.
i HATE the walrus and the carpenter.
10/7/2009 c1 eru-iggy-is
I meant meter. Whatever, I fail at poetry. But little as I know, I know I enjoyed it. ;p
I meant meter. Whatever, I fail at poetry. But little as I know, I know I enjoyed it. ;p
10/7/2009 c1 1oldsinsicantdelete
Ahah, I thought I recognized the rhyme pattern. :)
Loved it, freakin' brilliant.
1oldsinsicantdeleteAhah, I thought I recognized the rhyme pattern. :)
Loved it, freakin' brilliant.
10/7/2009 c1 25Name On The Spine
*laughs* that was sweet. I like it very much. A sort of tickles-your-insides funny :) Very creative plot. It reminded me of that song from Guitar Hero when you defeat Lou. Or lose to him.
I like the format, also. It's cute. Poem-y, but doesn't seem like a poem. A baby epic, maybe?
25Name On The Spine*laughs* that was sweet. I like it very much. A sort of tickles-your-insides funny :) Very creative plot. It reminded me of that song from Guitar Hero when you defeat Lou. Or lose to him.
I like the format, also. It's cute. Poem-y, but doesn't seem like a poem. A baby epic, maybe?
10/7/2009 c1 abcdefg8EN
wow, that was hilarious.
and so CLEVER.
you're a poet and-
well, you probably know it, since you wrote this.
wow, that was hilarious.
and so CLEVER.
you're a poet and-
well, you probably know it, since you wrote this.
10/7/2009 c1 30Captain Holly Short of the LEP
oh gods, it was incredible the poetry-the imagery. i found myself laughing at every verse. you should definately be a poet with that sort of talent.
In my head now i am creating poems with everything i say,
i suppose this sort of thing happens to me eyeryday.
When i find myself laughing hard of what others have achieved.
Then i find myself trying hard please a simple need.
I find myself wanting to write what others have thought up.
Maybe i should keep on trying or maybe i should just give up.
You should keep on going my friend as your talent grows
to make people big an small forget about their foes.
Dont worry i wont steal your idea it was just too fantastic. i dont think i have that sort of talent at all
30Captain Holly Short of the LEPoh gods, it was incredible the poetry-the imagery. i found myself laughing at every verse. you should definately be a poet with that sort of talent.
In my head now i am creating poems with everything i say,
i suppose this sort of thing happens to me eyeryday.
When i find myself laughing hard of what others have achieved.
Then i find myself trying hard please a simple need.
I find myself wanting to write what others have thought up.
Maybe i should keep on trying or maybe i should just give up.
You should keep on going my friend as your talent grows
to make people big an small forget about their foes.
Dont worry i wont steal your idea it was just too fantastic. i dont think i have that sort of talent at all
10/7/2009 c1 32Kitsune Heart
OMG...that was REALLY clever. The rhyme scheme was pretty good, though I always felt a small stumble at the end to the sixth line. I'm just used to four and eight-line stanzas.
Ah, the chicken dance...
32Kitsune HeartOMG...that was REALLY clever. The rhyme scheme was pretty good, though I always felt a small stumble at the end to the sixth line. I'm just used to four and eight-line stanzas.
Ah, the chicken dance...