
11/1/2009 c2 puffdadder
interesting so far, will have to read more before i can give a full critique. otherwise grammar and spelling are good and the story is vying for my attention for some reason. until then good job.
interesting so far, will have to read more before i can give a full critique. otherwise grammar and spelling are good and the story is vying for my attention for some reason. until then good job.
10/9/2009 c1 JustJazzy00
YAY!
Yet ANOTHER NaruRuki story! I LOVE THEM!
And this is probably the first one that has them kiss and act all lovey-dovey~
CONGRATULATIONS!
I'm so happy to be the first reviewer!
Until next time!
Ja mate ne!
\(^^)
YAY!
Yet ANOTHER NaruRuki story! I LOVE THEM!
And this is probably the first one that has them kiss and act all lovey-dovey~
CONGRATULATIONS!
I'm so happy to be the first reviewer!
Until next time!
Ja mate ne!
\(^^)