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6/17/2018 c1 HoneyBear84
Love it
12/3/2016 c1 wandamarie
thank you
10/21/2015 c1 Jissy2013
Cute
3/29/2015 c1 23Pepperonyfan1982
new cat treats, not knew cat treats but otherwise... cute
12/23/2009 c1 2I-stabbed-him-with-the-pencil
That was... slightly disturbing... But either way, it was funny.
10/14/2009 c1 rara999
We love it when romances are told through other points of view.

And we love cats.

So this was onto a winner from the very start.

Yes, we're always a bit iffy with mpreg, but that's personal preference. And there's no canon reason why it /couldn't/ happen, so we're fine with seeing it there.

Plus, you treated it in a really amusing fashion. I love how the first thing Severus did when he woke up was to yell at the cat.

There's a couple of spelling things - in the last few lines, 'knew cat treats' should be 'new cat treats', and a couple of times there's a misuse of "its/it's" and "to/too".

For future reference: its without an apostrophe means 'belonging to it', and it's with an apostrophe means 'it is'.

"Too" with two 'o's means 'an excessive amount' e.g. 'too much'. I remember this by thinking that if the word has too many 'o's, then it's means there is an excessive amount of something.

All in all, this fic was really good. It didn't really need backstory, as it was just an observed scene - everything worked really well!

Well done!

RA

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