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9/8/2021 c1 lan
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11/3/2020 c1 dddddd
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5/3/2020 c1 Yuhiko 788
Brah, U don't post stories that u wrote when u were 10. I mean yea good job for a 10 year old a bit inappropriate for one (also how are daffodils sexy) but it was too fast.
Not judging u im only saying
PS. Pls don't kill me.
12/15/2018 c1 64crystalblue19
IM ADOPTING 10 YR OLD HYDRAG, SHES SO CREATIVE~
1/3/2015 c1 Guest
For a ten year old thats still pretty emprissive but I can still tell lol
11/23/2014 c1 Iheartonceuponatime
I love this story! It's really cute and sweet
10/20/2014 c1 sydney
More please? Its so good
4/3/2014 c1 Jennessa
Hiya! I loved this one, but I would like it if there were another chapter!

Jennessa

P.S. I'm not judging you!
2/15/2014 c1 Guest
Lovely story! Gal we both know we hate sakura who needs a pink head loser like her. Sasuhina rules! Love the story very cute - xx sasuhina forever xx
6/22/2012 c1 3Yanirca
good but at the end that was major occness lol
9/6/2011 c1 1Suraya Bakboord
AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW I ALSO WANT A KITTEN!
8/23/2010 c1 1JaMisa27
aww yea!
7/5/2010 c1 3doodlefucker
aww! i hate sasuke but he's such a sweetie in this!
2/7/2010 c1 I-Rawr-Panda's
Nice and intresting
11/2/2009 c1 stuff the world with cake
I liked the beginning (everything before "Hinata entered her school ..."). I like it when authors do that.

What do you call it?

And the overall story was okay, although by the end I felt that the 'envious' point had been lost or forgotten. I felt like there should have been a line near the bottom that stated or implied that she was still jealous, or not jealous anymore, or now Sakura was jealous of her - something like that. But that's probably just me or I probably missed something (which is very likely).

Anyway, I DID (really, really did) like the Sasuke parts where he was SWEET - as candy.

"I can give you popularity ... who has no friends so I can be her friend ..."

There were moments.

I think I might have been inspired myself sometime during the story but ... I don't remember what it was (maybe I wrote it down).

Well, sorry about the long review. Hope it doesn't hurt your eyes.

Or maybe the story could have ended somewhat like it was begun?

Sorry, sorry, I'll leave now! Heh.
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