for Finally Over7/21/2010 c1 
23Mooncombo
Well written story. I would imagine that it is difficult to use lyrics and weave them in as dialogue, but you have done so nicely here. Kudos!
23MooncomboWell written story. I would imagine that it is difficult to use lyrics and weave them in as dialogue, but you have done so nicely here. Kudos!
11/7/2009 c1 15Cricket Songs
Aww, this is short but really good. :) It's weird seeing lyrics incorporated into dialogue like that, but I think you handled it well.
Great job!
~ Cricket
15Cricket SongsAww, this is short but really good. :) It's weird seeing lyrics incorporated into dialogue like that, but I think you handled it well.
Great job!
~ Cricket