for Jaspers Baby Bella5/14/2020 c18 Charlotte Holden
Nooooooooooooooooooooo Bella why!
Nooooooooooooooooooooo Bella why!
9/22/2018 c19 
7Sunspot101
The ending was beautiful, it really was. But, the story in its entirety left something more to be desired. If feels like it all came to an abrupt end without resolving everything. But, at the same time looking back at it all I guess it's ok that it ended that way.
P.s. Will you be writing a sequel for this?
7Sunspot101The ending was beautiful, it really was. But, the story in its entirety left something more to be desired. If feels like it all came to an abrupt end without resolving everything. But, at the same time looking back at it all I guess it's ok that it ended that way.
P.s. Will you be writing a sequel for this?
7/4/2018 c19 Emmy
I love this sad story and how you were able to write a sad ending that many writers will not write. I love the story!
-ECCO
I love this sad story and how you were able to write a sad ending that many writers will not write. I love the story!
-ECCO
7/5/2017 c19 jasper and bella
oh it made me cry It was so sad I cant believe she would do that she a witch for hurting a child
oh it made me cry It was so sad I cant believe she would do that she a witch for hurting a child
4/14/2017 c12 Aleyah
I was wondering how you can go to your profile to look at the pictures/videos
I was wondering how you can go to your profile to look at the pictures/videos
2/3/2017 c19 Guest
hahaha bih
hahaha bih
9/21/2016 c19 ThaleiaEuphrosyneEveningshade
Read this a hundred times. Not saying that I dislike your story, its really awesome but of all the possible endings or outcomes, it just HAD to be Bella dying. BUT as you are the author, I respect your wishes... though what REALLY bugs me is why they didn't change Bella. I mean, RosalieEmmett were in worse conditions... I'm just wondering...
Read this a hundred times. Not saying that I dislike your story, its really awesome but of all the possible endings or outcomes, it just HAD to be Bella dying. BUT as you are the author, I respect your wishes... though what REALLY bugs me is why they didn't change Bella. I mean, RosalieEmmett were in worse conditions... I'm just wondering...
7/23/2016 c19 Inuhunk
Omg I started crying!
Omg I started crying!
6/28/2016 c4 Guest
amazing and so realistic
amazing and so realistic
2/22/2016 c18 MISS JXHNSXN
Don't be put down by what some of the readers think. I bet some of the horrible reviews you get don't have an account meaning they probably don't write Fanfic stories, so they can't diss your work if they haven't written anything themselves. If you like writing, then carry on and do what you love because I know there are some people out there who do love your stories and would love to read more. ; ). 3 3 3.
Don't be put down by what some of the readers think. I bet some of the horrible reviews you get don't have an account meaning they probably don't write Fanfic stories, so they can't diss your work if they haven't written anything themselves. If you like writing, then carry on and do what you love because I know there are some people out there who do love your stories and would love to read more. ; ). 3 3 3.