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6Dragon Courage
That was amazing your detail was amazing your plot was amazing, you did amazing. Pls update soon
6Dragon CourageThat was amazing your detail was amazing your plot was amazing, you did amazing. Pls update soon
11/13/2012 c2 19Kurami Rocket
Great stroy! The twerps deserved what they got for always getting in Team Rocket's way!
GO TR! THEY'RE THE BEST!
19Kurami RocketGreat stroy! The twerps deserved what they got for always getting in Team Rocket's way!
GO TR! THEY'RE THE BEST!
9/4/2012 c2 gina torres
can you please continue this story
can you please continue this story
7/30/2010 c2 begger
I beg you!Please update this!I am dying to read!
I beg you!Please update this!I am dying to read!
7/23/2010 c2 BH
Please update it!I want to see more!
Please update it!I want to see more!
7/23/2010 c2 BH
Please update it!I want to see more!
Please update it!I want to see more!
12/13/2009 c2 Tsar001
DUDE, THAT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER! OMG GREAT DETAIL, DESCRIPTION AND EVERYTHING!
Now, one thing I noticed is your dialoging. When someone talks, only they can talk in that paragraph. If a new person talks it's a brand new paragraph. The rule applies for thoughts too. OTHER THAN THAT, GREAT! (Frosted Flakes!)
DUDE, THAT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER! OMG GREAT DETAIL, DESCRIPTION AND EVERYTHING!
Now, one thing I noticed is your dialoging. When someone talks, only they can talk in that paragraph. If a new person talks it's a brand new paragraph. The rule applies for thoughts too. OTHER THAN THAT, GREAT! (Frosted Flakes!)
12/13/2009 c1 Tsar001
Is it Ash in this chappie? Hehehe...how dark and depressing. Just my type of fic. Whilst I normally wouldn't read a story with Ash in it this has perked my interest!
Is it Ash in this chappie? Hehehe...how dark and depressing. Just my type of fic. Whilst I normally wouldn't read a story with Ash in it this has perked my interest!
11/29/2009 c2 ThunderRiver411
Nice story so far. Continue soon.
PS: I'm working on a story to if you want to take a look at it.
Nice story so far. Continue soon.
PS: I'm working on a story to if you want to take a look at it.
11/21/2009 c2 Autumn
oops sorry meant good chapter
oops sorry meant good chapter