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5/23/2010 c1 1Frocked
This story is a fail. First of all, the whole karaoke thing is cliche. Please get some imagination. Second, you misspelled some words and you were missing a few commas, but that wasn't the biggest issue.

The whole chapter one was messed up. You copied it twice and... this was just crap. You have way too many one liner paragraphs. Get some detail, wont you?

And whoever told you that you are a good writer, they are out of their minds. This is crap, It is nothing but crap. Fix it, or delete.

Oh, and you spelled your title wrong.

♥,

F[rock]ed
1/16/2010 c4 5xXLove Me xx Hate MeXx
Please keep writing
12/22/2009 c4 34yourfriendlyneighborhoodturtle
When are you going to get to the Karoke part?
11/10/2009 c4 11JinxSaw
Bella's trying to burn Edward. Hm, very competitive these Cullen's are, aren't they, lol!

Kat
10/24/2009 c4 4twilightROXmySOXoff
bella need to burn ecddward lol but thisz i good i liek it lol its funy so yeah update i liek ti adn i bet alie izs being hannah monatna (i hate that brat) lol but eyah ok idk what emmetts goign to do but eyha aweoimeness story
10/24/2009 c4 9FallenAngelofDarkness923
ROTFL MAN THIS STORY IS AWESOME SO KEEP ON WRITING

-DARKLUST
10/24/2009 c4 7TheAllbrighton
cool lol i hope edward doesnt die you know lol
10/24/2009 c4 3lil-skyhawk2016
lmao
10/18/2009 c3 11JinxSaw
This is jokes, please write more.

Kat
10/15/2009 c1 2Absent Imagination
It kinda copyed twice, but it was good cant wait to see what happens next!

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