
7/13 c9 Guest
I want the mcgonagall scene. And harry enlisting tonks' help preparing for it. Or idunno, maybe he'll try it on a boggart instead
I want the mcgonagall scene. And harry enlisting tonks' help preparing for it. Or idunno, maybe he'll try it on a boggart instead
6/11 c2 Andy
These are so well written. Theyre all talking and behaving perfectly in character (except for the sex part) its really easy to imagine it's them.
These are so well written. Theyre all talking and behaving perfectly in character (except for the sex part) its really easy to imagine it's them.
12/15/2022 c9 omh666
That was actually a pretty amusing ending. I was scared for a bit that you were going to write the ritual between them, but... I do enjoy how you ended up going about things.
That was actually a pretty amusing ending. I was scared for a bit that you were going to write the ritual between them, but... I do enjoy how you ended up going about things.
8/16/2022 c9
2subhogue
Great story, loved the smutty and comedic themes. Also you have now pointed out that I have been saying a characters name wrong for over 15 years so both thank you and fork you for that. XD

Great story, loved the smutty and comedic themes. Also you have now pointed out that I have been saying a characters name wrong for over 15 years so both thank you and fork you for that. XD
8/14/2022 c9
4Jetstream
"I originally intended chapter nine to be a full-on Harry/McGonagall scene, but I couldn't bring myself to write it."
Bah, coward. :P
McGonagall's in her sixties, for a group of people that live well past a century as a matter of course, she's just middle aged. And, frankly, Dame Maggie Smith was hot between the ages of 20 and 50-ish :P

"I originally intended chapter nine to be a full-on Harry/McGonagall scene, but I couldn't bring myself to write it."
Bah, coward. :P
McGonagall's in her sixties, for a group of people that live well past a century as a matter of course, she's just middle aged. And, frankly, Dame Maggie Smith was hot between the ages of 20 and 50-ish :P
5/6/2022 c4 StyxUA
I don't understand what's so funny in Tonks showing naked Molly or Sybil. I find it quite disgusting, and I wonder how Harry was able to have sex with her afterwards instead of storming out and vomiting.
I don't understand what's so funny in Tonks showing naked Molly or Sybil. I find it quite disgusting, and I wonder how Harry was able to have sex with her afterwards instead of storming out and vomiting.
4/10/2022 c9
6Chalayne
I wouldn’t want to read the act but I would love to read how he talks her into it! Oh - even better Hermione should be the one to do it

I wouldn’t want to read the act but I would love to read how he talks her into it! Oh - even better Hermione should be the one to do it
12/6/2021 c9 Cosray8d
Well it was fun!
The unusual topic of his size being so present throughout the story and him always being the but of a joke was a bit annoying though.
Well it was fun!
The unusual topic of his size being so present throughout the story and him always being the but of a joke was a bit annoying though.