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3/29/2012 c1 40Exploading albino potato
Near wasn't OOC wich was good I liked how he just tolerated Mello hitting him. And when Matt said that like a loyal dog he had to follow Mello. I don't think Mello would cry like that in front of everyone though, he would probably try his hardest not to and then cry later when he was alone.
3/29/2012 c1 Exploading albino potato
Near wasn't OOC wich was good I liked how he just tolerated Mello hitting him. And when Matt said that like a loyal dog he had to follow Mello. I don't think Mello would cry like that in front of everyone though, he would probably try his hardest not to and then cry later when he was alone.
10/18/2009 c1 2tamatoe-tomatoe
Wow, i really enjoyed this!

It was just the right size and the emotions that were flowing out of your writing were so terrific, well done! :)

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