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5/21/2010 c1 angela4148
That was def hot! I think Bella came like 15 times, GO EDWARD LOL!
12/16/2009 c2 imlovinfanfic
holy hell that was hott!
12/15/2009 c2 1wytchwmn75
Another yummy one! And of course she would want to marry him! He's Edward freaking Cullen!
12/15/2009 c1 wytchwmn75
Wow, that was hot!
11/3/2009 c2 1unresolved conflict
Sweet baby jesus! That was...amazing. Now time for a cigarette. Lol.
10/31/2009 c2 sassy41
I so love this story

I am glad they waited

It means so much more that the waited instead of getting together the first time. He finally knows what he wants. Man Bella is a little sex kitten, gr. You go girl. Love it

can't wait too see where you take us next
10/31/2009 c2 Hxosnxk
Yet another amazing chapter!

I loved it, well done :D

Fee.x
10/31/2009 c2 smexy-bella
Have to say I freaking LOVED it hahah hope to see more
10/31/2009 c2 tiggerlover1971
ok I love this story and wow I love these versions of these chapters
10/19/2009 c1 Mo'Reading
This was pretty good, one thing though some of the terms you use for the female form sound kind of manly for example ‘groin’ (I realize it is a femal term but a woman would never call it that) & nub not to sexy. It made Bella sound like she doesn’t have a good view of her body or something. A woman would not normally talk about her female body parts like that and in the situation they were in I would think most women would use sexier terms for herself. Even Bella would, actually I think Bella would more so because she already feels non-sexy so she would never use terms that sounded demeaning or unsexy for herlself.
10/18/2009 c1 unresolved conflict
I'm ready for round 2. Wow that intense! =)
10/18/2009 c1 sassy41
I have goosebumps and my hair is on end

love it

thanx
10/18/2009 c1 2song of a break up
OMG! I thought I was the dirty one :)
10/18/2009 c1 Hxosnxk
That was SO worth the wait. Seriously magnificent. Well done :)

Fee.x
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