for Where do you go, Gin?10/21/2009 c1 
22ManonLeChat
Hey! Not bad for a first fic! You need to break this into paragraphs (it will make it easier to read) but nice depiction of a moment in time. Good job.
22ManonLeChatHey! Not bad for a first fic! You need to break this into paragraphs (it will make it easier to read) but nice depiction of a moment in time. Good job.