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9/6/2010 c1 5Foeseeker
Hoho, prissy liddle miss Kurda-sissy, playin' the high-an-mighty in her nighty. Ahem. Sorry, couldn't resist the rhyme. :-D

I can actually see that happening, and it works for a detail of one of my stories even better than the original Triss did . . .

I must say, Rocc and Triss sent a shiver up my spine, too. I don't blame Kurda for getting scared - hehe, I would have been if I were her. *ghost music plays, shadowy figure sneaks up on Kurda* Sorry, my practical joke-ness running away with me.

As usual, please write more!

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10/20/2009 c1 2Aurola Seadevil
I love it! I like how you showed Kurda's cruelness.
10/19/2009 c1 30Adder of the Pit
Couple things: the Ratguards invaded Triss's home to take slaves, they didn't buy them. And Rocc Arrem wasn't enslaved; he was already dead after fighting them.

Enough nitpicking. All in all, you have the characterization down, and this is very well written. I hope you can write full-length Redwall fics like this. I'd certainly try reading it.

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