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11/19/2014 c1 Mererid Song
Wh..Where's the rest of it?
11/18/2014 c1 17Haitoku-Chan
nooooo nooo nooo it can't end right there! PLEASE make more!1 I want to know what happens!
10/25/2013 c1 2AwkwardCutness
Ohhh, please update soon!
9/16/2013 c1 Guest
Please hurry soon!
12/28/2012 c1 Phoenix's Inferno
Sweet XD Is there going to be more chapters?
10/2/2011 c1 2deathcab4cutie17
to be continued? u havnt updated in 2 friggin years! wat is wrong with you?
7/5/2010 c1 9Kelsey-Short
I love these -girl character's getting hurt/sick stories your writing! Cause then it like idk! I just love all this! Update!
12/27/2009 c1 1CrazyPandaLov3r
I like it. It's a nice little fluffy read. Although I think Fang's slightly out of character. I mean, it is in his viewpoint, so he's thinking. But he or the flock don't even fight the Erasers off, despite the fact that they're all after her. Wouldn't they help Max? They fight 'em all the time... It's probably needed in this story but it's pretty OOC.

Also, in chapter one, at the end "I vaguely felt his ropy, hard arms surround..." try using a different description of his arms- sorry, but it's cliche. :)
12/24/2009 c1 2mangatiger14
it's really good and i like your writing style =) a little less POV switch but other wise i like it!
10/20/2009 c1 Emmafer
Please stop the POV switching! That's annoying.

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