Reviews: Forbidden Fruit

for Forbidden Fruit

12/29/2018 c1 Alicia Janae Alexander
It was so good but different

9/10/2017 c1 sue1zide
Ha-Ha! I was expecting her to wake up from a crazy dream at the end of this.

10/23/2016 c1 jk
Wow, that was the dumbest pos I've ever read

10/6/2014 c1

3FlowerChickie
"My yoga pants were forgiving"... love it! And I know how you like apple pie ;)

3/23/2014 c1 GallagherLuvrStarCNW28
Wow! Loved it! Great job on how you portrayed Edward!
-GLSCNW28

9/28/2012 c1 BreakingTwilightTillNewMoon
You should make more stories like this. It's really interesting.

9/28/2012 c1 GothBunny259
Great first story.

9/28/2012 c1 RedViolet101
This was really good.

8/21/2012 c1

31momma2fan
Nice story. A different twist on vampirism...good job

5/19/2012 c1

8Dil9
An interesting twist with the apples:) loved it:)

4/10/2012 c1

2Coonkisser19
i like it but now i want to know what happens next

12/9/2011 c1 dowlingnana
I hope I don't offend you, but I had to chuckle just a bit at this story. Apples? lol I'm going to be taking a look at your other stories as well...toodles.

9/18/2011 c1 maddy
i am reading all of your books is there going to be more than one chapter? good so far.

with lots of Pandas,

love, maddy

9/3/2011 c1

12XlaraC
This was a great story; I loved it.

3/15/2011 c1 E.Cullen1901
that was amazing! i loved how they fed, that was a brilliant idea:) great story

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