for Forbidden Fruit2/5/2011 c1 
14CharDenae
Hahaha! I loved the twist with the apples! Brilliant! Not only are apples the 'forbidden fruit' but one is also on the cover of Twilight... I love that! Great concept! Very creative! I sure hope those boys kept tiring those girls out, though! ;o)
14CharDenaeHahaha! I loved the twist with the apples! Brilliant! Not only are apples the 'forbidden fruit' but one is also on the cover of Twilight... I love that! Great concept! Very creative! I sure hope those boys kept tiring those girls out, though! ;o)
1/22/2011 c1 1short-stacks-little-pirate
You really are a truly amazing writer! All of our stories are uttelly amazing and i cant believe that this was your first fanfic! Keep writing because i love your stories!
1short-stacks-little-pirateYou really are a truly amazing writer! All of our stories are uttelly amazing and i cant believe that this was your first fanfic! Keep writing because i love your stories!
1/13/2011 c1 MrsPeachesK
AHHHH!...love itt my fav writing podigy!...yuhh are amazingly...i love tht so muchh!
AHHHH!...love itt my fav writing podigy!...yuhh are amazingly...i love tht so muchh!
9/21/2010 c1 Luv4Kristen
Cute story. Well written. I loved this line "the only person that can help me with the vampires in my living room is the vampire in my bedroom." Hah! Great job. Thanks so much for sharing :) Gwen
Cute story. Well written. I loved this line "the only person that can help me with the vampires in my living room is the vampire in my bedroom." Hah! Great job. Thanks so much for sharing :) Gwen
9/16/2010 c1 5vivx-chan
I think it was very original (vampires feeding of apples... ;P) and kinda cute...
5vivx-chanI think it was very original (vampires feeding of apples... ;P) and kinda cute...
8/10/2010 c1 11Now and Forever true
hey i have read all of summer vacion up t date. since i love that so much i thought i would try your other story and i love that as well :)
keep writing can't wait for me
11Now and Forever truehey i have read all of summer vacion up t date. since i love that so much i thought i would try your other story and i love that as well :)
keep writing can't wait for me
6/21/2010 c1 beate73
Um... This is an odd cookie of a fic. In a positive way. I love the original twist you have here.
Now, the beta in me cannot shut up, so here goes: I see your tenses are a bit all over the place, but that's a common mistake most of us make at first, so I wouldn't worry too much about that. That's something your beta should be able to catch for you. I love what you did here, and can't wait to read your multichap story. :)
Um... This is an odd cookie of a fic. In a positive way. I love the original twist you have here.
Now, the beta in me cannot shut up, so here goes: I see your tenses are a bit all over the place, but that's a common mistake most of us make at first, so I wouldn't worry too much about that. That's something your beta should be able to catch for you. I love what you did here, and can't wait to read your multichap story. :)
11/1/2009 c1 EvylTwynNita
Well done! I love the whole "forbidden fruit" to sustain their life. Congrats on your first fanfic & good luck in the contest!
Well done! I love the whole "forbidden fruit" to sustain their life. Congrats on your first fanfic & good luck in the contest!
10/22/2009 c1 2Yorkshire Rose
Ooh, this was so good!
And different!
I've never read anything like this before! :D
2Yorkshire RoseOoh, this was so good!
And different!
I've never read anything like this before! :D