
3/23/2013 c1 crazy.weird.beautiful
I hink it's nice. Definitely something you could develop into something more...
I hink it's nice. Definitely something you could develop into something more...
7/7/2010 c1
16Zombie Reine
Honestly I hope you don't rewrite this, I enjoyed it so much it's beautiful and sad! If you must write a new version, but keep this one or I'll be sad! ♥Zombie Love♥

Honestly I hope you don't rewrite this, I enjoyed it so much it's beautiful and sad! If you must write a new version, but keep this one or I'll be sad! ♥Zombie Love♥
1/9/2010 c1 Guest
I loved this one-shot because it seems like a plausible scene that JKR left out, which was awesome. And in comparison to "Objects in the Mirror" (which I read first) I thought this one was a lot better, but that might because there was more to read and to me Voldemort seemed more seductive.
I loved this one-shot because it seems like a plausible scene that JKR left out, which was awesome. And in comparison to "Objects in the Mirror" (which I read first) I thought this one was a lot better, but that might because there was more to read and to me Voldemort seemed more seductive.
12/24/2009 c1
26Midnight Lost
This is a great start, and even though its been months. I do hope you come up with some more updates for this.

This is a great start, and even though its been months. I do hope you come up with some more updates for this.
10/23/2009 c1 IndigoPeregrine
I really like this line "She would lick her lips. Because they were so dry. It was so hot. All around her, wide, empty plains of cracked, dry dirt. There was nowhere to go."
Thank you for posting
I really like this line "She would lick her lips. Because they were so dry. It was so hot. All around her, wide, empty plains of cracked, dry dirt. There was nowhere to go."
Thank you for posting
10/21/2009 c1
8TheLadyBookworm
I know you said this is a one-shot but I would love to read more about why she's having these dreams and what not.

I know you said this is a one-shot but I would love to read more about why she's having these dreams and what not.