for Kizuna11/24/2013 c12 Guest
I really like this fic, from beginning to end! I hope you could write a sequel. :)
I really like this fic, from beginning to end! I hope you could write a sequel. :)
3/4/2013 c12 tk04
It cute though I feel the relationship between went to fast but again you did mention the timeframe. I guess it work. Thank you!
It cute though I feel the relationship between went to fast but again you did mention the timeframe. I guess it work. Thank you!
3/4/2013 c1 tk04
"It's okay, I don't love her anyway. It was arrange marriage"
I found this sentence, just too funny. Tezuka just flat out saying it like he didn't care if she die bc that how it should be. I know you didn't mean to make it sound like that. lol
So far, the story it interesting to read. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
"It's okay, I don't love her anyway. It was arrange marriage"
I found this sentence, just too funny. Tezuka just flat out saying it like he didn't care if she die bc that how it should be. I know you didn't mean to make it sound like that. lol
So far, the story it interesting to read. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
8/9/2011 c12 Yuukiri Junn
This story is seriously nice except for a few broken english here and there :P
This story is seriously nice except for a few broken english here and there :P
4/21/2011 c1 
25Kimmytrainer
Okay, I'd just like to say that you might want to add in your summary that Ryo's mother died, because right now, it looks as if Tezuka is going to cheat on his wife when you read the summary. Just letting you know.
Anyway, this is a good story so far. There are some grammar mistakes, but nothing I can't understand. Well, I think I'll keep reading now.
25KimmytrainerOkay, I'd just like to say that you might want to add in your summary that Ryo's mother died, because right now, it looks as if Tezuka is going to cheat on his wife when you read the summary. Just letting you know.
Anyway, this is a good story so far. There are some grammar mistakes, but nothing I can't understand. Well, I think I'll keep reading now.
8/27/2010 c12 tictaktoe
luv this story so much!
its so sweet and cute and heart warming and eeeep.
i just luv it. i think it was the first story i read in fanfic.net.
-sigh- i would read this story over and over again.
plz continue the good work XD
Perfect Pair RULEZ!
luv this story so much!
its so sweet and cute and heart warming and eeeep.
i just luv it. i think it was the first story i read in fanfic.net.
-sigh- i would read this story over and over again.
plz continue the good work XD
Perfect Pair RULEZ!
5/17/2010 c12 22azab
it was a wonderful story
thank you so much for the story and also thanks I
didn't expect you would choose Tsubaki XD
waiting for your new story please tell me when you publish it
22azabit was a wonderful story
thank you so much for the story and also thanks I
didn't expect you would choose Tsubaki XD
waiting for your new story please tell me when you publish it
4/30/2010 c12 12crosstheindigo
Aw~
That was so cute :3
I liked the ending.
I enjoyed reading this story! Great job :D
12crosstheindigoAw~
That was so cute :3
I liked the ending.
I enjoyed reading this story! Great job :D
4/30/2010 c12 ayame shuurei
well the last line tuzeka made wos touching and kinda unlike tezuka at all i really like it though hope to see another fic from you.i will gladly support it :D
well the last line tuzeka made wos touching and kinda unlike tezuka at all i really like it though hope to see another fic from you.i will gladly support it :D
3/22/2010 c11 22azab
nice chappi, Ryo is is so so cute
i liked the twins also and sorry i don't have any names
i like Tsubaki but i don't really have names "sorry"
please update soon.
22azabnice chappi, Ryo is is so so cute
i liked the twins also and sorry i don't have any names
i like Tsubaki but i don't really have names "sorry"
please update soon.
3/12/2010 c1 vinaLe
Devi-san.. I really like your story so much.. The way you write makes me easy to understand your story and never makes me boring..
I'll be waiting for your next chapter and your next story...
Ganbatte ne..! ^_^
Devi-san.. I really like your story so much.. The way you write makes me easy to understand your story and never makes me boring..
I'll be waiting for your next chapter and your next story...
Ganbatte ne..! ^_^
3/11/2010 c11 1yuulovesme
Wah~! i love this one!
Not much torture Tezuka, but Its really really god~!...
* i like the name
"aya", or "Miki", or "Mika" or "Hikari"...
it's all common name in other animes, but i like those.. What do you think?
-yuulovesme
(camille)
1yuulovesmeWah~! i love this one!
Not much torture Tezuka, but Its really really god~!...
* i like the name
"aya", or "Miki", or "Mika" or "Hikari"...
it's all common name in other animes, but i like those.. What do you think?
-yuulovesme
(camille)