for The God's Warnings8/12/2013 c1 Guest
I think you should do more chapters , I really like them
I think you should do more chapters , I really like them
8/2/2010 c1 Guest
This is my favorite out of the two stories you wrote! I'm not sure if there is a second page but I will find out...eventually.xD You have a natural flow when you tell a story obiviously and quite an imagination. Although your natural flow is aparent there are still some rocks disrupting it like a river or more precisely a stream. There like nature is only one solution: smooth the rough stones. To do that you will need time. In a writers case keep writing. Unlike most people who would try to move them, use it to develop your own ,what I like to call, essence. Terriffic story like I said very pure. As your bff I say you can write! And I wouldn't change that statement even if I didn't know you. Congrats keep it up! I'm waiting for the next one
Your friend since last I can remember and to the unforseeable future, Dominique
This is my favorite out of the two stories you wrote! I'm not sure if there is a second page but I will find out...eventually.xD You have a natural flow when you tell a story obiviously and quite an imagination. Although your natural flow is aparent there are still some rocks disrupting it like a river or more precisely a stream. There like nature is only one solution: smooth the rough stones. To do that you will need time. In a writers case keep writing. Unlike most people who would try to move them, use it to develop your own ,what I like to call, essence. Terriffic story like I said very pure. As your bff I say you can write! And I wouldn't change that statement even if I didn't know you. Congrats keep it up! I'm waiting for the next one
Your friend since last I can remember and to the unforseeable future, Dominique
3/18/2010 c1 Raven D
it was good tara :) i really wanna know what happens to adrisa alone and if the tribe gets punished so you should continue :D
it was good tara :) i really wanna know what happens to adrisa alone and if the tribe gets punished so you should continue :D
12/7/2009 c1 
2Crispy Gecko-Chan
Hey Tara! Im so glad your finally getting into fanfiction! =] i feel special LOL im ur first reviewer! =D i may not know much about Okami, but i think this was a great start! This story reminds me of... it reminds me of those old short stories that teach you the most valuable lessons in life. All wise-sounding and whatnot.. lol keep up the good work and i want another chapter soon! i wanna know what happens to Adrisa and the other members of the tribe after the cross over!
Much love, Sophie =]
2Crispy Gecko-ChanHey Tara! Im so glad your finally getting into fanfiction! =] i feel special LOL im ur first reviewer! =D i may not know much about Okami, but i think this was a great start! This story reminds me of... it reminds me of those old short stories that teach you the most valuable lessons in life. All wise-sounding and whatnot.. lol keep up the good work and i want another chapter soon! i wanna know what happens to Adrisa and the other members of the tribe after the cross over!
Much love, Sophie =]